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Reviews for Archery

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  • From RayeMoon on March 30, 2010
    LMAO!

    Great, great story. Good dialogue, good scenery, great descriptions... and then that hilarious end to tie it all together!

    Easily one of my favorite InuYasha oneshots. Thank you for the great ficlet!
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  • From XxSangoxX on February 15, 2007
    HAHA
    that's TERRIBLE!! lol *in a good way* They were fucking watching?
    damn.

    You should add a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Iyasu on September 03, 2006
    Wow! I loved it! *snickers* I wonder what Kagome would think if she knew that they had been watching. Which reminds me... why on earth were they watching? I mean... that's just a little wrong, counting on the fact that they're family members.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 10, 2005
    that was funny, if a bit gross at the end. souta's part was funny, the fact that her mom adn grandfather listened in is sort of disturbing
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  • From ANON - sisana on October 15, 2004
    Hey, it's me again. I must say that you really did a good job with Kagome and Inuyasha's personalities. Some authors make Inuyasha soind ind of sex machine and to me this is very, very wrong. It gets really strange when in such stories he blushes when Kagome simply touches him and in the next moment he is ready to jump on her, don’t you think? Anyway, good work! And I think you should make another story like ‘Archery’ and ‘Rain’.
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  • From SilverFox on May 09, 2004
    Nice! I liked it! Especially the Omake! I love those when they are written well! LOL, ROTFLMAO! Heh heh! ^_^ Anyhoo, until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - HK. on December 26, 2003
    HA HA HA HA omg that endding was funny and the rest of it was well i am really really happy now.
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  • From ANON - Try To Make Me Sit on October 05, 2003
    wow! that was cool!
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  • From ANON - watermermaid158 on September 28, 2003
    that was great writ more
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  • From ANON - KagomeRain on September 27, 2003
    Okay i loved your story for three reas
    1.
    1. the beggining how ever you can up with such a clever funny, and true to story beggining is beyond me
    2. the lemon, aw come on anyone else who read that lemon must have thought it was good the dialoge and all were sweet and tender and cute
    and
    3. The ending funny as all hell i was laughing b/c you get out of this sweet tender moment to her her family making bets on there continuing genology ha ha

    well love your work
    peace
    kagome rain
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on September 27, 2003
    Awesome story, defiantly one of my favorite Inu&Kag lemons!
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on September 26, 2003
    OH YEAH!!! Nothing like a killer one shot... Very well writen too... I might add... I enjoyed it greatly GOOD JOB!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hakuryuu on September 26, 2003
    Gorgeous... Just gorgeous... with a true Takehashian ending... is that a word? Anyway, AWESOME keeping in character (I know it's hard with lemons, but you did an exceptional job) and I really liked that mention of Miroku. Great story!
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  • From ANON - aleaha on September 26, 2003
    all the Omake I've ever seen have left me crying with laughter *mind you I've only seen the one's from Fushigi Yuugi and Blue Seed* ok now you got me thinkin about how funny it would be to have Kagome's grandpa chasing Inuyasha back to the well with a broom in one and and the ofuda in the other *giggles* and Kagome stuck in her room glowing red blushing from being caught...ok well great lemon please write some more lemons
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 26, 2003
    lol Ive read this story before I k onk on the Church..and its still an awsome one shot lemon I soo love it..dang where can I get me a bow and arrrow and a hunky Inu??? great job..ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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