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Reviews for From Anger To Passion

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From ANON - Phillis on December 25, 2003
    Great.I loved it! Your great at writing these fanfics!
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  • From ANON - ApriL on October 06, 2003
    Good story
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 06, 2003
    ooh that was totaly hot..wow I sooooooo loved it and you kept Kagome and Inu in charactor which is totally cool..great lemon, great one shot..ty..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on October 06, 2003
    Me likes...^.^ I like...I really like...>.> It's so good... I'll read some more of your stories after midterms...Which are Wednesday...^.^'
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  • From Sephirajo on October 06, 2003
    It's a good start. But you make one of the most common begining writer mistakes. Evtimetime someone new is speaking, that's a new paragraph. Every time. Other than that it was pretty good. And it should only take you a couple of minutes to fix that. ^_^
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on October 06, 2003
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 06, 2003
    He He... that was good... always nice to make up after a fight!!! Great Job!!! keep'em coming... Mules
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  • From ANON - Roxotaku on October 06, 2003
    You write very good lemon scenes, and the fight between Inuyasha and Kagome was also very well written - it was totally IC and believable. I don't really like when people don't seperate the dialogue from the body of the paragraphs though, it kinda makes it harder to read. Also, you should try and be more descriptive and do less explaining when you introduce a story. And I was surprised you had Kagome wanting Inuyashas child so quickly, isn't she a litle young - or did you age her to a point where she would want to settle down?
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  • From ANON - Helen on October 06, 2003
    So good. ~grools~ Maa, you write the most excellent Inuyasha and Kagome lemons. Please write another one soon. Ja ne!
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