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By : Riomi
  • From ANON - Rasberries on December 12, 2003
    Like the latest chappie! His servants sound so exotic, sad, sorrowful, but exotic. Sesshomaru seems a bit malicious, ne?
    Ya got me erinering what he is going to do to the poor girl in his bedchambers. Kagome is getting stronger. Like seeing
    that. I am anxious how your are going to get Sesshomaru to bend for this to become a Sess/Kag. fic. It is a Sess/Kag right?
    I am not too big on that pairing but I still like this story so keep it up. Will await the next update. Ras.
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  • From ANON - Lady Knightstar on December 10, 2003
    Very Nice. I lost track of it for a little pit. but it came along quite nicely. I really am interested in finding out where you are going to have sto story go.
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  • From ANON - jessa on December 10, 2003
    pretty good so far
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  • From Strawberries on November 16, 2003
    Oh, I liked this chapter very much! Finally, Kagome's gettin some real defiance to her. I can tell she is trying to be strong now. Because Inu told her to live. Sesshomaru is very in character, so in character I can't believe that he will change from it,
    if that is what you planned that is. If you are going to make this a Kag/Sess fic I can't see the attraction between the two yet. If you are going to take your time with that it's all the better. I am going update soon. as soon as my beta sends me her edits. Great chapter! Ras.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on November 12, 2003
    MMMUUWWAAH**blows kiss** Your so nice to address your reviewers! Oooo...Sessh got thrown against a wall and thought it "fun"? watchout Kagome, you might ignite the wrong reaction, eh. (Grammar Critique)I may be wrong, but in the line... "I know(should be past "knew")that I shouldn't have said it, but I don't (should be past "didn't") regret it." It just seems to work better in past tense. Thanks for the chptr. And yeah I'll try email, tho I'm having a second line put in this week so be patient K?
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  • From ANON - snowcat on November 07, 2003
    PLEEEASSSE MORE!!! You're going great guns so far! I have high hopes for this story, I've read and re-read it and read it again. I like the stories that delve into the charaters thoughts (keeping them true to the original author's personalities), I am especially intersted with any that tries to enterain usSessSesshoumaru's disposition. Does Sessh have one arm or both? Not to run with your story or maybe out guess it, but yours could be an open door for Sessh to have to confront his psychogenisis as to why he detests humans so much, and that reals him into a series of mental tormoil because that's his hurdle in order to wield the Tetsusaiga. Oh, and I'm one who nglyngly supports that Sesshoumaru would be out of charater if he gave any admiration or desire to anyone who didn't earn it in some way (that's where it becomes interesting to hear writer's come up with different theories how he changes). One very slight critic though, revealing how the environment around them effects them, if any.

    Antisipating the UPDATE! I'm sure it will be good.
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  • From ANON - PoisonDragon on November 06, 2003
    very nice, so far. the plot needs to move a little faster, but it looks promising - good job!
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  • From ANON - Rasberries on November 05, 2003
    lol, nah, it's not easy. but it is meant to be fun. I have great fun when I write. The problem is, finding time to write. lol.
    Now about this chapter, applause! very well done. I am not a fan of first person speaking but this story has me liking it.
    This chapter was very good. Very in character, something I have so much trouble with. I sense the coldness of Sesshomaru
    and the despair of Kagome. Rin's private thoughts was a great touch. Got to go, till next update, Ras.
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  • From ANON - Faith on November 04, 2003
    Your back! Yay!!! Can't type much now but please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Reiku on November 03, 2003
    Not bad. but you're using the wrong 'Fowl' It should be Foul meaning bad. Fowl is a bird. Bascially you wrote that the servants where washing the bird smell off Kagome rather than the nasty smells.
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  • From ANON - Crash on November 03, 2003
    Very good, once again. There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing major. e yoe you update again soon.
    Later - Crash
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  • From ANON - Fyyrrose on October 28, 2003
    another great addition! Can't wait for another addition! Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - megitsune1 on October 27, 2003
    i really hate him yet i love him so much. strange huh? o well. the story's good cept i hate the fact that inuyasha is dead. that's the only thing i hate. did rin pick up the shikon no tama? it'd b kool if she did. o well keep writing. ja na
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  • From on October 25, 2003
    keep it up and update soon
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  • From Strawberries on October 24, 2003
    Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
    pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
    has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
    was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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