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Reviews for Overwhelming Desire

By : Lease242
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 15, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - inu_lover1978 on December 06, 2005
    That was great.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 02, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - neptune on October 02, 2005
    I LOVED IT lol great would have loved to have a little more but you had me all ah flutter lol I'm like wow very graphic loved it write more lol......I will read it if you write it lol......please keep up the GREAT work lol.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 02, 2005
    Oops. The disclaimer was so small that I didn't see it. Anywho, please send a not to the probs group so they can have the techs fix this issue. It also helps to determine where it is originating so that it can be fixed. There are other orphans out there too and they are looking for the owners.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 02, 2005
    Hey there. Hot fic. *blushes* You like the talking, don't you? That has always embarrassed me. Fics like yours will help me get over it.

    You need to put up disclaimers. The note at the top of the page says it will be deleted in 30 days if there isn't one. Also, there is a technical issue that you need to report the the problems group (link above). Your last three chappies don't have your author's name on them. So they are orphaned in the database. Let them no so the techs can fix it.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on September 09, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - lee on September 24, 2004
    very good
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  • From ANON - Tay on January 02, 2004
    I really wish you would not end it here. It is just to good to end here. Maybe you could do a sequel about there life as mates and give them a kid. Maybe show how the other lords take the news.
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  • From ANON - scarredbride on December 15, 2003
    Hehee, Loved it. A little different with the type of sexual descriptions for me, but it works for you. I totally felt the heat going on there and lets just say... hmmm... damn... lol I want Sesshy so bad right now and want him to do that to me! *sighs* Unfortunately he isn't real, but hey I can still dream. LOL. Anyway, just wanted to review and say congrats on another great lemon.
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  • From Levii on December 12, 2003
    (Fans self) Few! that was intense! man! you're good at writing lemons! i can't wait read more! Keep writing honey! (Hands a box of cookies) Here, you deserve these! Man! that was wild! Great job babe!
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  • From ANON - yelly on December 11, 2003
    this is tochy chy no romance
    i mean it is ok but still
    i guess im just a romantic at heart
    i like the whole i love you thing
    and speaking in the first person is ok
    i guess i just didn't like this chapter
    oh well it was well written but i just don't like it
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on December 11, 2003
    Ok this is a really good story, but you need a beta-reader. You go from 3rd person point-of-view to 1st with out a little note or anyt say saying who it is, which isn't so bad until you start trying to do 1st person point-of-view for both charac at at the same time and that gets really confusing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2003
    YAY!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!! Thank you for updating youory.ory. It is/was very good.
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