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Reviews for Overwhelming Desire

By : Lease242
  • From ANON - fuzzy on December 09, 2003
    O___O wow............-twitch- that was interesting....................yet I liked it......indeed I liked a lot, good job!!
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  • From ANON - Knightstar on December 09, 2003
    Wow what an overwhelming seen. It was very well detailed. It was a little slow to start off but you madefor for that nicely
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  • From ANON - Seth on December 08, 2003
    wow... Amazing write... Just utterly amazing...
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  • From ANON - just me on December 08, 2003
    Everytime I see your story at the top of the page, I believe you have added another chapter. Now I keep seeing it over and over and over and over. I understand the importance of editing but this is getting ridiculous. My impression is that you make one small change just so that your story appears at the top of the list. I am not for for flaming but this is getting fucking stupid. Either add another chapter, do less updates or delete the damn story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2003
    update your atroy, WITH A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! it's annoying when i think that there might be a new chapter everytime i see your story and theres not. just update the god damned thing!!!
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  • From ANON - scarredbride on December 07, 2003
    I like your story so far and hope it will continue for awhile longer. Even though you may not get many reviews, it all just comes down to: people are generally too lazy to review. What you should look at(from my author POV) is to continue the story for those who do review and are loyal readers, they are who matter. Who cares about the ones who remain quiet, if they enjoy it great, if not... then so be it. Hope to see more chapters out soon!
    ~scarredbride
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  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on December 02, 2003
    my goodness i loved it please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - ugly on December 02, 2003
    OMG! He has sex with her and still doesn't mark her! NooooO!!! But it seem like he really really really really really likes her! I would find it so so so so sad if he doesn't! Ooo I hope you continue with htis story, it's really good. lol Kagome's really good at seducing this sexy demon lord. lol, well hope you update soon! LOVE YOUR STORY! YOU ROCK!
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  • From ANON - Naheta on December 01, 2003
    nice job, i hope there is more to the story lol.

    Naheta
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  • From ANON - CM on November 22, 2003
    Wow! Your a really good lemon writer! ^_~ Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on November 21, 2003
    Pretty good, but it's a little difficult to follow with the jumping around in perspective and position. Is Kagoma holding on to the branch or Sesshomaru's neck? Is she facing the tree, or does she have her leg around his hips? Is it written in first person or third person? Kagome's point of view? Sesshomaru's? In the opening paragraph, is it Kikyo who has come to terms with her feelings or Kagome?

    These are things that are easily rectified, and doing so will change your story from "pretty good" to "very good" or even "excellent."

    Keep trying - practice makes perfect!
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  • From ANON - odile on November 17, 2003
    *fans self* gah...i think i feel over in my chair due to sensory overl *pr *presses hands to cheek* yup, not going
    to be able to cool down for a while *big anime thumbs up* awesome!
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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on November 01, 2003
    Great story! I can't wait to find out what happens next! This is definitely a good plot and I most definitely want to see how it develops. Ja ne! ^.~ v
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on November 01, 2003
    Awesome start! I can't wait to see more
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  • From ANON - Seth on November 01, 2003
    I'm loving this story more and more by the minute... Very well written chapter, I can't wait to see how she plans on getting close enough to him to actually try and seduce the great youkai...

    Brilliant chapter,
    Later...
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