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Reviews for Foever Love

By : AngeryFlame
  • From PhiPhi on October 25, 2008
    okay, that had to be one of the most horrifying fanfics I have ever laid my eyes upon. SERIOUSLY LEARN HOW TO SPELL AND IF YOU KNOW THAT YOUR WORK IS TOTAL AND UTTER CRAP THEN DO NOT, I repeat... DO NOT POST IT ON THE INTERNET FOR OTHERS TO READ THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY HORRIBLE AND I AM SURE THAT I WILL SPEND THE REST OF THIS EVENING SCOURING MY EYES WITH LYE AND ANTI-STUPID SOAP TO CLEANSE IT FROM THE TRASH THAT I JUST READ. -_- I read the reviews to this story before I tried to read this garbage you call a story and after reading their feedback I just had to see for my self how idiotic and stupid the story actually was and frankly I agree with everyone that said that this story was trash. And to those that think that this "story" was actually something worth reading and that it was good. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT A GOOD STORY IS THEN! This fanfic looks like it was written by some drunk crack induced monkey with a keyboard and a hammer! WTF WERE YOU THINKING YOU DAMN MORON!

    In all honesty I can't say that I am sorry for this flame or that I am sorry for anything I said But I do have some advice for you:
    1) Learn how to spell properly and learn grammer
    2) Find out how to spell the characters names that you are using
    3) Get a beta reader or at least use spell check
    4) Read over your work. If you can't understand what is going on in the story, your readers can't either
    5) and finally, please for the love of god and all the kami in the universe, never ever write another story this bad again please!

    ~~Soubi_Shoukyaku~~
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  • From kawaii0nnan0k0 on August 19, 2007
    Generally I'm not one to leave negative comments on people's stories especially seeing as how as an author I know how hurtful it can be...But you are DESPERATELY in need of a beta. I'm not quite sure, if you speak English or if ebonics has just tainted your spellng beyond belief, but frankly this story was just UNREADABLE. I had no idea what you were trying to get across half the time, and the other half I had to spend so much time deciphering what you meant I just about gave up. I would say do a repost with a good deal of spell checking. But yes, I'm also contemplating your age range, as it seems a little... Well... Surface level. Good try though, better luck next time.
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  • From angelicyokai on March 21, 2007
    This may be a good story, but please just spell check...or get a beta or something there are words in here that don't show up in any dictionary.
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  • From ANON - Natts on January 09, 2007
    What is this? There are so many spelling mistakes in there. I didn't make it past the first chapter before wanting to turn away.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2006
    wow that's bad english
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  • From ANON - LoupeyLady on March 01, 2004
    I tried, I really tried to read your story. I just could not get over the sheer number of typos. You may want to go back over this.
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  • From ANON - ???? on November 11, 2003
    Look not to be mean or anything but u have to learn to spell. You spelt Sesshomaru's name wrong and Kagome's name wrong. Learn how to spell and then write again

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  • From ANON - SilverKitsune on November 06, 2003
    LOL....what the heck!! Sure, I had a great time trying to figure out what some of the words are and names, but really!!! Please get a beta reader!!!!
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on November 06, 2003
    For the love of god! get a beta reader!!
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  • From ANON - bad luck hulahula on November 06, 2003
    Thanks to you, skarid is my new favorite word! Anyways, this could be a great story if you cleaned up the spelling/grammar a LOT and maybe added some more to the storyline. A good first attempt, especially if you're not familiar with the English language (doesn't seem so....) Keep trying!
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  • From ANON - on November 06, 2003
    not to be too ofensive, but you should be a le moe more careful wwritwriting with spelling and grammar. half of the first chapter is one big spelling or gramerical mistake, and the other half doesn't make much sence because of the other errors. please look over your chapters before you post. it helps to read them out loud with some one.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on November 06, 2003
    LMAO.... this is way to funny.... I love it... sooo U are a person with a sence of humor well YIPEEEE!!!!!.... and having three baby's to funny... I must say I really find this funny I have to guess at some of the words and figure out what U are trying to say but it makes my brain work over time.... He He...was was just wandering how that erm is doing of Sess's and I love the pairing the Hick pairing.... Rid'em cowgirl....lmao.... to funny at first I really didn't understand but I think I may be catching on and Yes i will continue to keep an eye on updates and I am FOR SURE gg itg it five stars.... Thanks for the laughs my head is in a spin now... and my sides hurt like they havn't hurt in days.... So my Hat is off to ya and I hope everyone else can catch the humor in this for I think it is sad if they do not..... Go Angry.... Let'em have it....MULES
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  • From ANON - Karasu Youkai on November 06, 2003
    ummmmmmmmmmm? i'm glad you're joking... tell me you're joking...

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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on November 06, 2003
    AngeryFlame I am willing to help with the spelling and grammer if you would like. I enjoy the story but it is quite difficult to read due to the spellind gnd grammer. I am not sure if you speak English or are trying to translate from a foriegn language. Either way I am willing to help you if you want, though it may take me a little time due to workload and such. Let me know.



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  • From ANON - Sendai on November 05, 2003
    Spam is good on crackers but not AFF.net.. Get lost idiot. Yes, someone of your intellegect is considered an idiot.
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