Reviews for 'Just Say Good-bye, Kagome'--Chp corruption fixed

BY : KanzenNeTsuki


  • From ANON - Anirume on December 22, 2005

    I not only thought that your fic was well written as usual, but that also your writing style portrays the feelings of the characters very well. Your attention to detail when describing the setting always adds to the visual mental image that seems to bring your storys to life. Another one of my favorite atributes of your writing is the way your fics are always tied to such strong plots, really drawing the reader into what you are trying to convey. Your fics also move fluidly and at a rather upbeat pace that keep me interested the entire time, even when there is a sceen about a character's thoughts and feelings. I enjoyed this fic alot, but I think that "The Black Hawke" really shows your true potential as a writer and is by far my favorite fic in that entire catagory. I sincerly hope that your keep going with that one especially, because I can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 16, 2004

    i know i already reviewed this once but lord its just so great! mature and sensible with normal realistic romance adn thats the best kind. such a great job!!

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  • From on August 25, 2004

    Wow. That was such a wonderfully written fic. I loved how you showed that a marriage can get better if both sides put some effort into it. Maybe then so many couples wouldn't divorce so quickly. Great fic, I loved it tons. Keep up the great work. :)

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  • From ANON - catti-dono on June 19, 2004

    Tsuki-sama:

    Yes I went ahead red read the second chapter, you know I would; do I detect something personal in this story? Something that might have happened? It was very good.. Arigatou for sharing... much love

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  • From ANON - catti-dono on June 19, 2004

    MOU, Tsuki-sama!!! I was just cruising around, decided to go totally OCC and read a little inu, was I surprised ANGST is not the word for this chapter, it nearly brought me to tears, dont know if i can read chapt two without the kleenex....

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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 16, 2004

    Wow what an honest protrayl of marriage. It is as you said. It is hard work. But if you keep at and let them know you love them and care about them then it all works out and is h alh all the hard troubles. Marriage is like a career it is a job but it is also what you want to do in life. It is the sweet joy and the sour sadness. But even though the good is few and far between it is made up by the quality of it. And no I am not married. But Marriage is like life. Nothing worthwhile is given you have to earn it.

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  • From ANON - drake220 on June 16, 2004

    ::wah::!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was beautiful! oh, i love love! ::sniff:: i actually have tears in my eyes (not sure if its from the story or because i liked the fic so much that i didn't blink) either or, it was a wonderful fic! BRAVO!!!

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  • From ANON - lere on June 16, 2004

    That was the most sweet lemon you ever wrote! But I can believe that ended alread! Please, I want to know about the baby and if they will reabe abe able to keep their promises! Congratulations sensei, they wasn't too OCC in that chapter. Your touch is better now.

    Big hugs from your number one fan!

    Lere

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  • From ANON - No One Knows on June 16, 2004

    This is a really, really good story and I hope there is still more to come!

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  • From ANON - Ceaseless Cloudy Days on June 15, 2004

    Wow, that was great for a firstie! I liked it a l..I ..I find it hard to believe that Inuyasha has a romantic bone in his body. But then again, this story is in an AU, so it doesn't really count. Good job! You seem so mature that I think you're the only person that's actually over 18 in this section, lol...XD

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  • From ANON - maria on June 15, 2004

    I REALLY like your story. You are so right that it takes more than just having material things to make a relationship work. A lot of couples brake up because they don't get the emotional support they need. I like that you have Inu & Kag realizing that they have a problem and so being comitted to each other that they are working it out. Many couples don't do that, they just head straight for the divorce lawyer.

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  • From ANON - jules on June 15, 2004

    Nicely done. Inu is rarely humble and it is a refreshing change. I really liked the AN in the beginning. What you said is very true and easily forgotten.

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  • From ANON - jules on June 15, 2004

    Nicely done. Inu is rarely humble and it is a refreshing change. I really liked the AN in the beginning. What you said is very true and easily forgetten.

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  • From ANON - szmadad on June 14, 2004

    Hey there..this is my 2nd attempt at reviewing..argh the server gets so picky sometimes :)

    You have an interesting beginning since Inu and Kag are already married and have obviously been experiencing problems like any normal couple - how do you define being a good spouse -is it by the material things you can provide or the intangibles that make your partner feel special and loved?

    It's nice that has has an epiphany about the way he's been treating Kag but wow -he certainly did NOT let her have any say during that phone call! I mean, she wanted to talk to him and he just poured forth with his own emotions not giving her any time to react.

    I hope that yourt cht chapter is one where they can actually COmmunicate :) And of course make up - they so obviously love each other...and they should reconcile. (Inu-Kag should always be together in my book....)

    :)

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  • From ANON - subaru on June 14, 2004

    I loved it! I cant wait for the next chapter this one made me cry. ^_^

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