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Reviews for Butterfly

By : Hikariangel
  • From ANON - owwww on May 09, 2003
    Ok, I don't normally do this, but:
    What on earth made you think it was a good idea to use japanese words!? This is an English fanfic, I couldn't read any of the dialogue ;_; And that's pretty sad, considering I'm bilingual. If you're going to use Japanese words, use the RIGHT ones. The names weren't even translated right. And to be honest, you shouldn't be using any Japanese words when your audience is all English-speaking. If you want to use Japanese terms, write it in Japanese.


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  • From ANON - Amarapapa on May 05, 2003
    Naughty little brat! Not as much japanese. Other than that it is perfect.
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