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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - New Fan on March 18, 2005
    You made a comment in this chapater about the Light can not met with the Dark or the beginning will occur again (how everything started)?
    I wonder if the Light represent Midariko and the Dark represents Naraku or the worm that Midariko is fighting in the jewerel (spell)?
    When will I read any fighting scene? enjoyed the chapter.
    Update soon
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  • From ANON - New Fan on March 14, 2005
    Great chapter. I am a little confuse to keep the other characters (new ones) straight. Is this story based on a book you had read?
    Will Inuyasha confess to Kagome about his true feeliings? Uddate soon.
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on March 14, 2005
    this is an amazing story keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - New Fan on March 08, 2005
    I read your story for the first chapter until now. I really like this story. I love the originality of it and like how the
    brothers torture each other. My question for you is this. The god Aldur told Sess that Rin was his soulmate? The question is
    how old is Rin in this story? Will you have Sess and Rin "together" in this stroy when Rin comes of age? Will you have Rin
    come to age in this story? When will the brothers see some action? Love this strange and worderful story. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gem on March 06, 2005
    i am enjoying your story very much even though I am only familar with the Inuyasha characters. I find they way you have written it to be very easy to read, it has a good flow to it, and it is very discriptive. I am able to get a mental image of what you are writting. It is one that I always look for to see if it has been updated.
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  • From ANON - Collgegirl on March 06, 2005
    Poor, poor Inu and Kagome. You just love torturing them don't you? LOL. Loved this chapter, and I can't wait until Sess decides to take matters into his own hands and get those two together. INu Yasha really needs to take a chill pill and start trusting his older brother, itn's not like he's going to do anything to Kagome. I loved the Ramen scene, poor INu Yasha had to share. The horror. The flashlight scene was funny along with the whole dress thing. Poor Inu Yasha can't help but stare. He's just asking for it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - andross on March 06, 2005
    great story!!!!


    inuyasha no baka!! being mean to sesshomaru-sama like that. kagome should sit his butt till hes six feet under!
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  • From ANON - Meres on March 06, 2005
    Do you know what would be awesome? Having Kagome totally flummox Belgarath and Beldin by answering their favourite put-down arguments--like why the sky is blue or why the sun rises in the east etc. Also, I must ask, have you not read Polgara's book or are you just omitting it? You haven't included her twins . . .
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  • From ANON - andross on March 01, 2005
    ok now i undersand more. PLZ update this story rocks. your probably best crossover writer ever!
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  • From ANON - andross on March 01, 2005
    .................... im confused.............

    this is a great story but i dont understand whats going on
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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on February 28, 2005
    Very funny chapter with some great interaction between Kagome and InuYasha along with Sessh. Gotta love the Flower King reference and I can see poor Sess sitting there with a frown on his face bedecked with flowers. Poor Inu-Yasha has to ride a horse instead of running around, and to make matters worse the horse likes him. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Collegegirl on February 22, 2005
    Loved the part where the God came in and told the two boys about having a soul bond with the girls. That was so cute. I can just imagine Sess cuddling Rin close. I can't wait to see Inu-yasha's expression when Kagome comes back from her bath in the small tunic. I'm glad there was some fighting there, don't want them getting too soft now do we. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on February 22, 2005
    woot woot, Sesshoumaru and InuYasha are gonna kick some demon ass!!! man, this is getting good. i'm still so lost as to where they are am wondering why kaggers hasn't thought of alternate dimensions...i mean, come on, star trek, she's had to have seen it! lol. anywho's great updates and i can't wait to see where this goes!!
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  • From ANON - Collegegirl on February 21, 2005
    I love this chapter, especially the Sess and Rin fluff. Lucky for Ce'Nedra that Rin was there, otherwise she would have been dead. I love the relationship Inu-Yasha has with Kagome, perfectly done. Can't wait for the next chapter, time to meet the god.
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  • From ANON - Tejas on February 21, 2005
    smooth interplay with the crossover(still) .Just don't make Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha to pasive,that's just not our boys.

    loved the Rin/Sess fluff. Really bring back memories of the books with your story.To few can actual pull it off(goode crossover).
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