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Reviews for Love: Lost and Found

By : notezbingweez90
  • From LadyRin on May 07, 2017

    Write a sequel please.


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  • From wolfy27 on April 28, 2008
    (btw not jared wolven but his girlfriend because he didnt sign off on my laptop and i don't know how lol)
    when i read about what had happened to you recently i nearly cried and im soooooo sorry for your losses
    and that just makes your writing all the much better. love this story so much and i'm so hooked on every word
    keep smiling
    alix _ x
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  • From Kace19 on March 21, 2008
    very good story keep up the good work
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  • From sugar0o on November 28, 2007
    i really liked this story, very sorry to hear about your loses while it was written.
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  • From Crysan on November 26, 2007
    Please write a sequel! It would be awesome!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 26, 2007
    I apologise for finding this delightful tale so late. It is just that.... a delightful tale. The characters were a little ooc but... that is why there are creative licenses. Yes? I enjoyed it immencely and hope to read more from you! Bravo!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 26, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From TheMikoShivae on October 28, 2007
    holy cow. awesome story.

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  • From unlikelygoddess on June 22, 2007
    I know that it has been a long time since you have worked on or probably even looked at this story, but I have just finished reading it and would like to ask you to finish it. It is a wonderful story and it is clear that you have a gift for creating and writing captivating stories. I understand that much has been going on in your life, and for that I am truly sympathetic. However, I would like to ask you to finish this story. If this is not possible for you, then please disregard this and know that I still hold you in the highest regard.

    Domo arigato for a fantastic story!
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  • From CherieElizabeth on May 30, 2007
    I believe you have a great knack for storytelling. I also believe that you would be wise to take on a beta editor for your future stories, just to work the kinks out.

    Small things I noticed were the name Joken which is spelled Jaken, which you had left a note about not knowing the correct way.

    And also this part:

    He strode to door adjoining their rooms, placing a fine-clawed hand on the knob, turning slowly

    If you wished to be cannon in the IY world, sliding screens were all they had at the time in Feudal Japan which starts around 1185 CE in the Kamakura period.

    And also the random Author notes in the middle of the chapter are quite distracting. When you’re telling a story, you’re asking your readers to suspend all reality for a bit and fall completely into your story, living in the scenes you set up and watching as the characters progress in their relationships.

    The same goes for the flashbacks and the times in where the characters are in different places but you’re telling the string of events in two separate paragraphs.

    You never have to say “BEGIN FLASHBACK”

    You can start by saying something like, “Sesshoumaru recalled a moment that happened the previous fall….”

    Or “Five minutes before…or at the same time, Whatever.”

    To keep your readers with you in a fluid line of reading it’s better to go about it like such:

    Kagome sobbed into her arms as she curled her body as tight as she could around herself.

    Meanwhile, Sesshoumaru changed into something that was more befitting for the remainder of the evening.

    It’s just the little tweaks to make a good author, which you most undoubtedly are, into a superb author.

    Over all, I enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write a fine tune your craft! I hope to see more works from you in the future.

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  • From ANON - Kaienah on October 17, 2006
    I think you should write a sequel. You are a gifted writer. I enjoy this story.
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  • From ANON - roora on September 15, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! oh please please pretty please make a sequel i will be forever greatful and endebted to you. i am sorry you lost freinds in the hurricane that must be hard but from one mourner to another the pain will subside eventually this i promise.



    arigato for writing this totally awsome story
    roora takanashi ^_^
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  • From ANON - roora on September 15, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! oh please please pretty please make a sequel i will be forever greatful and endebted to you. i am sorry you lost freinds in the hurricane that must be hard but from one mourner to another the pain will subside eventually this i promise.



    arigato for writing this totally awsome story
    roora takanashi ^_^
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  • From ANON - Naito_Mitsukai on July 17, 2006
    OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE your fic SOOO much!!! O.O please write more? ... pretty please? ... pretty pretty please? IT'S SO AMAZING!! O.O "if you want a sequel, tell me in a review and I will definitely consider it!" PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! *glomp* I'll love you forever? *puppy eyes* .O.O.
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  • From ANON - Wolf on January 27, 2006
    Most beautifully done. i love it and cannot wait until you next update. hai, i do want to see a sequal to this fic and i treuly hope you do make one. i would love to see how creative and realistic you can make a fic but not overly done so that it looses intrest. please make a sequal and entrance me again with your writing. Good job and good luck.
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