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Reviews for Lunar Eclipse

By : Bunnybop102
  • From ANON - angel23 on October 25, 2013
    Please update.
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  • From loretta537 on April 27, 2008
    this sounds like the start of a good story, i hope you update it soon.
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  • From on June 21, 2007
    Its a good story, but you need someone to review and edit it, if you cannot do it yourself. Please be considerate and edit your story before you post it.

    Please continue, anyway.
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  • From SuperHottie101 on February 03, 2007
    its really good
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  • From ANON - hmmmm on September 12, 2006
    maybe you should break things apart into paragraphs...it was very hard to decipher
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  • From ANON - Mimi on July 28, 2006
    More more more. Add me plz.
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  • From ANON - Super gal on June 29, 2006
    i love it but u made a lot of mistakes which made it kind of confusing like you kept refering to kagome as isis im not trying to be mean just thought id let u no anyway update soon.
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  • From ANON - chaosbitch on June 29, 2006
    its a good consept.. you should make him work harder to see her smile and much harded for her to willingly submet make her will strong. update soon
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  • From ANON - Caramel on June 26, 2006
    This is pretty good! hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - T on May 21, 2005
    You need to break your story into paragraphs.
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