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Reviews for Rivals in love

By : rinflowers1986
  • From Kayerfire on December 28, 2017

    MORE PLEASE!!!!! 

    I love it! From Koga (reluctantly) caring for Inuyasha to when he took human Inuyasha I love it! And Sesshy showing up to avenge his brother's rape & revive him was awesome. I also like Inuyasha's dream of Koga after it happened. Please don't leave is hanging loke this!!!

    Kagome needs to sit down somewhere after she abandoned Inuyasha. He belongs to Koga now!


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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on May 25, 2016
    Make it were Kagome and the others see Kouga kiss Inuyasha and he kiss Kouga back. Kagome runs to the well and sits looking down, Sesshomaru smalls her tires. To put out there can you make it were, Sesshomaru sees kagome saying "No one loves me, why can't anyone love me." Sesshomaru answers "Miko, I don't understand what feelings are, but I do feel something that makes this Sesshomaru want to be near you."

    You can use this and add more, change it around some. :)
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  • From loveless on June 25, 2015
    Just update n tell me when u do
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  • From ANON - Starshima on September 28, 2013
    WOOOOOW WHAT A STORY!!!! INU&KOGA 4EVVRERRR PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPPIEE!!
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  • From Tamafluff on August 01, 2013
    eeeeek!!! you cant leave off there!!!! i wanna know what happens next?!? andddd i havent read the original first couple chapters but i like the revised stuff more then the original other later chapters (
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  • From ANON - nuri on April 21, 2009
    "If you were expecting a new chapter, sucks to be you." Wow....way to be extremely rude to your readers. Despite that, if you do ever finish the story I'd still like to give it a chance.
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  • From SilverRain on July 12, 2008
    Awesome story! Like'n it so far! I'll be waiten until your all ready to post the enxt chap!
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  • From ANON - ad on June 14, 2008
    GREAT story--I hope you keep writing it!!!!

    I REALLY like what you did with the revisions! I remember reading this story before it was revised and it was good but now its evne better!
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  • From ANON - rainy_days on March 24, 2008
    Yay, I'm glad you're back!! ^^
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  • From HavocTellenoi on March 22, 2008
    Like it! the new chapters are delicious! Looking forward to the rest of the repost. ^_^
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  • From loretta537 on March 17, 2008
    hi, i really like this story. can you edit and update at the same time? please i want new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2008
    the intensity is so much higher in this incarnation of your story. i do hope you continue in this vein for the remaining chapters, and the conclusion of this story.

    i am so glad that you decided to come back to this story.

    the only thing to watch is homonyms. there/their, new/knew, then/than.

    thank you so much for this new beginning
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  • From yohanita21 on February 22, 2008
    Please, update asap...Need to know what happens next!!
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  • From DannyLove on February 19, 2008
    i loves it!!!! loves it loves it loves it! ^^
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  • From Ruffner on February 11, 2008
    i'm new to your story, so am unbiased to it and wanted to inform you that i liked your edited chapters. i'll keep watch for new additions.
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