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Reviews for Unexpected Endeavors

By : Scottishfae
  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on July 14, 2006
    I like how you got right to the plot of the story right away, no droning on and on about frivilous things. Obviously the foremost question is why would Sesshoumaru NOW, just all of a sudden, want an heir? I think you kept him in character well, but Im curious as to how you are going to portray Inuyasha. Sometimes authors just let him become too stupid to simplify the plot (its alot easier to get kagome with sesshoumaru if she doesnt have something else worthwhile to go to, hence making inuyasha look like a poor choice), and many times Inuyasha is treated as if he has no feelings or any concept of apathy for his companions, which if you keep him in character he SHOULD be at least somewhat contemplative about his actions and emotions. You have a very nice first chapter and I will enjoy reading more so please continue! If you are doing a mailing list for updates, can you put me on?
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  • From ANON - AIdeen on July 13, 2006
    Like this one a lot!!! Please up-date soon!!! mUst know what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - mel on July 13, 2006
    Yes, you need to continue! I like the concept and the dialogue. Please update soon!
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  • From tinytot on July 13, 2006
    I LOVE IT! heh, it may be... odd... as you so called it. But I think its a wonderful idea :)
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  • From ANON - gouku chibi fujo on July 13, 2006
    I love so far.Please don't stop
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  • From ANON - JadedInu on July 13, 2006
    Oh my god! This is too good not for you to finish!
    I totally liked the idea of Kagome agreeing to this without knowing!
    Update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jen on July 13, 2006
    update soon nice story
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  • From ANON - Metis on July 13, 2006
    *blinks* I don't know whether to be enouraging to this particular mode of thought or not. My mainstay is 'I hope the pup is full youkai', but this particular feudal mindset *cough*archaic*cough* is hard to encourage. I am curious to see what this evolves into though. hmm...
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  • From ANON - raven28 on July 12, 2006
    its rilly good keep it going, i can't what to read more

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  • From ANON - angeria on July 12, 2006
    your story is really good. and it's really funny too. i hope the next chapter will come soon.
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  • From ANON - akume on July 12, 2006
    Wow! It's been an extremely long time since I've read a new story from you and I must say this was a great start. Anyway, I can't wait for you to continue. So, until next time. Ja.
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  • From ANON - Sankontesou on July 12, 2006
    this is great...update again soon
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  • From Patty8401 on July 12, 2006
    Great fic. Love the originality of it, so far I don’t find the characters occ, maybe sesshoumaru is a little talkative but like you said is funny, please continue with it, hoping you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Googely eyes on July 12, 2006
    This was really good.
    Plz update soon.
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on July 12, 2006
    Well, that was unexpected. Poor Kagome. That was a great first chapter, looking forward to more.
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