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Reviews for Slave

By : sadeness
  • From ANON - Nori on July 14, 2006
    Well, I have to admit that the constant use of Japanese is very irritating. And you use it incorrectly a lot. And they didn't have "yin" back then, but that is what you called the money.

    If you are writing a story in English and the people reading your story come from English-speaking countries, then use English in the story.

    Honestly, only very immature writers use so many Japanese words and phrases in their anime stories. It might have been a good story if it didn't need a glossary long enough to make a whole chapter, but as it is, I won't be reading any more of it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2006
    I love it hope you update soon cause this so good it was cooler than cool anyways update soon can't wait for the real chap on 4 till next time bye-bye.
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  • From ANON - Princess Sin on July 13, 2006
    wow, this was great. imagine my heartbreak when chapter
    four was not a chapter. oh well, i hope you update soon. i'm
    dying to see what happens to inuyasha next.
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