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By : Crescentgray
  • From hellspixie18 on October 24, 2007
    love the story so far!!! I think the plot is very well thought out and it is coming together nicely. I would like to put a small suggestion in to maybe inspire your wonderful muse... when kagome finally remembers her past can you make the scene in front of the god tree (you know the one Inuyasha was pinned to). Have her brush her fingers over the hole where the arrow was and then her memories come to her in flashes, almost as if the god tree was "telling" her about her past. Some of the flashes could be Inuyasha's smile, a rare moment of affection...lol how she would sit him for all kinds of things, you know stuff like that. If you already know what your going to do don't worry about it, it was just an idea I had, I thought it would be nice for her to fully remember him by touching the tree he was pinned to for so long and of course it was the very first place she saw him. Well let me know what you think. e-mail me at hellspixie18 @ yahoo . com
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  • From Cochrann on October 20, 2007
    Ya know, as much as I would have liked a more 'climactic' ending...this epiloque is perfect and flows beautifully with the rest of the story. All and all you've done an excellent job and I honestly envy your talent and dedication.
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  • From SavannahMarie on October 20, 2007
    ( Sniffle-sniffles-whine-snort-blubber-keening wail-sniffle-blub )
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  • From ANON - Nikki on October 20, 2007
    That was a great story. I was hoping for alil more in the end. I hope to see more or something. I really liked the story line and how you made it seem different then all the other stories... I'll be looking for more or another story. :D

    Nikki
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 20, 2007
    *wipes at tears streaming down cheeks*

    Wow. What an ending. Or would it be a new beginning? Either way it is one hell of a story!

    I can't wait to read your next one! Could you please put me on that mailing list?

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - yamiyo tenshi on October 20, 2007
    That has got to be one of the best endings i have ever read. Its hard to believe a fanfic almost made me cry; only a few have been able to do that. Hell most books cant to that. I cant wait for your next story!!! You should try doing some original stories I bet they'd be great.

    :~D
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  • From ANON - The Mauve Hand on October 19, 2007
    *Whistles, cheers, applause, stomping feet* Yay!! I loved it. It totally choked me up and that doesn't happen often. I love you!
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  • From ANON - clavira on October 17, 2007
    that's so sad! of course she should forgive him! what else could she do? but not before he tells her the truth, that's a given. he should probably tell her how he feels about her, but as i know him (of as you portraid him) he won't be doing that anytime soon...
    oh well, i'm looking forward to your next update! (hopefully soon ;))
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  • From ANON - entropy9 on October 17, 2007
    wow... somehow I missed this until this morning...it's well, it's breathtaking, I'm a little disappointed that everyone is back (lol i know it's silly) and of course I'm glad everyone is alive, but I think you could have pulled it off if they had stayed dead...you seem to have talent, so a little death and solemn-ness is nothing you couldn't handle :-P

    anyway, I'm enjoying this and I can't wait for the end...and as a side note, i read your profile and where it say's CG: write bitches, I misread it as 'writhe, bitches' and I though, man this girl has some serious kinks...lol just thought I'd share my insane musings.
    entropy9
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Rei on October 15, 2007
    Rocks as usual. Can't wait to see what happens now that Kagome's happy wizard of oz bubble has popped and reality has set in. Thank you for being one of so few of the writers out there who can put a story out in fanfictom that it literately legible, God Bless You.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 13, 2007
    Damn!! What a hell of a chapter!

    I can't wait to see what happens next! Will they eventually kill Naraku? Will Kagome ever forgive Sesshomaru for his ommitance?

    Please upade as soon as you can! This story is wicked cool!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - Lexy on October 13, 2007
    omg, you made me cry! plz say this isnt how it ends!!!
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  • From ANON - Biggles on October 13, 2007
    Outsanding
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  • From SavannahMarie on September 23, 2007
    I have fallen in love with your story. I swore loudly when I came to the end of 'Rapture' and saw that I was S.O.L. concerning my closure. You've done an amazing job with this though, really. This was an instant favorite and hope hope hope you continue.
    ( hope hope hope hope )
    ( soon soon soon ?!?!??!)
    Either way, wanted to let you know how awesome of a job I think you've done - mad props.
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  • From ANON - Bluumberry on September 20, 2007
    It's hard to find decent stories of this pairing these days. Yours is superb actually and probably one of the best, if not the best, I have ever read. The pure emotion you write is just amazing, as is the way you describe the development of feelings. I look forward to reading more and I hope it will be soon ^^
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