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By : Crescentgray
  • From ANON - Dionysos on October 12, 2006
    ohhh she gets it and i got it to at the end of the chpater, iloved that the subtle way u have in ur fic and i'm really enjoying it as well. Keep up the great work, havent seen a decent fic in a while.
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  • From ANON - Cochrann on October 10, 2006
    Awesome!! I can't believe she nocked-out sesshoumaru! Great ending!!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on October 10, 2006
    Hot damn! What a story! This is amazing! I can hardly wait for the next chapter to come out!

    Could you please add me to your mailing list? I will try to send you an email to your address.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - K-Chan on October 10, 2006
    ^-^!
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  • From ANON - Aaliyah Starnight on October 10, 2006
    lovd it
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  • From ANON - Flightoffancy on October 10, 2006
    THis was a surprise. I loved all the mental sleuthing Kagome was doing, figuring out at least most of his little plot. The fact that she has kept all of her sweetness, caring and fire helps her do this, instinctively.

    I can understand why she sent Sesshomaru into oblivion, sometimes you are so mad that no amount of comforting will help and all you do is get madder. Finding out that someone gave their life for you, whether you remeber them or not, is a terrible burden on your soul and I cried when she saw the truth in his eyes. I love it when the muse takes things into her own hands. Then I feel you are along for the ride as well.

    This is so well written and presented so cleverly that you have quickly become one of my favorite authors. Til next time, Deb. Oh, and if you need my email again it is - pegasus4@bellsouth.net. I don's want to miss a chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dyquem on October 10, 2006
    This may be stupid to bother fixing it, but I MEANT to write "the little bits you put in, such as the microscope thought, are a good touch."
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  • From ANON - Dyquem on October 10, 2006
    I think you are doing a great job, especially for a first fanfic. The little bit like the microscope are a good touch
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on October 10, 2006
    My my... having no memory surely gives Kagome enough free time to fully study Sesshoumaru... *contented grin* I mean, only an amnesic Kagome with loads of time to spare would give Naraku such a sporadic, passing thought as "once we take care of that fellow", like he was an everyday chore or something. *amused grin*

    And the bit about bumping into a girl with her same face on the street... was that an indirect reference to Kikyo? Is she gonna show up in this fic?
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  • From RhiannonoftheMoon on October 09, 2006
    Oooh, I can't wait to see what is going through that pretty head of his, though I doubt he'll be too pleased by that last bit. Ha!

    Great job and looking forward to your next update.

    -RhiannonoftheMoon
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  • From ANON - Angie on October 09, 2006
    this is a really good, i wonder how it will all play out, ill be waiting for the next chap. and the lemon....UPDATE SOON!please
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  • From ANON - kookookitty on October 09, 2006
    i felt her confusion, her sorrow; even if she doesn't remember, her nature is compassionate and intrinsic selfless so, for someone to sacrifice himself for the love of her- she would feel gut wrenching sorrow and guilt, any attempts to comfort her would be met with resistance even violent resistance/rage.

    the goal of a true artist is to elicit emotion from those who view their work, in this; you have succeeded.

    i will send you an e-mail requesting notification of your updates, thank you for offering.

    sincerely,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - Flightoffancy on October 09, 2006
    THis is a very interesting story and quite unique. I like it when I read a story and it is so consumming that I don't feel like I am reading it but experiencing it. I don't know how many stories you have written but you have entered into this one like a pro. You have captured, most excellently, Sesshomaru and all of his complexities. I hold my breath every time Kagome opens her mouth and lets him know what she REALLY thinks. You have got them down pat.

    You also set up a sexual tension that almost has a life of its own, very compelling stuff. I really like the way the story is unfolding and the suspense, the whole story flows. My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net, if you have the chance please let me know when you update this most excellent story.

    Til next time, Deb.

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  • From ANON - Nic on October 09, 2006
    WooooW!!! I mean reall wow!!

    It such a wonderful story!! I just love your promise of lemons, but girl, you're really good! The plot is really fascinating!! The way how you describe every single movement or the way "he" looks at her...that so beautiful!! You really have talent!! Oh, and I simply LOVE how the plot moves on slowly, alright relatively "slowly", (if you get my hint.. :P). And it's soooooooooooo sweet how you picture Rin...!!! CUUUUTTTIIIEEE!!!!

    REALLY; REALLY WELL DONE!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

    PlEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ( VERY SOON!!!! GRRRR)
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  • From ANON - SylviePrincipal on October 08, 2006
    That was really great so far!! I have been so upset at not finding any good KagxSess fiction latelly and you really made my day! Thanks and make sure you update olease! *wink* SYLVIE
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