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By : Vyper

From ANON - k lave demo on March 09, 2009
sigh.......k. i understand, no jatsu but u have to asmit that whole segment was funny. not much to say tonight. Hasta luego!
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 08, 2009
phhttt...hehehe... allergic to fleas. cough. ahem. okay... i must say that i would never have considered that. i feel bad for heather honestly i do but i think it works out this way especially if kouga finally gets himself a woman n inu can have kags back. seriously poor heather. i'm never sure if i like some part of bankotsu's character or not. i figure i'm probably not going to like him this time around n since u like to torment the taisho characters why not bring jakotsu back. i honestly found it funny when inu and jatsu first met. again just a suggestion. au revoir!
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 08, 2009
wow thanks for the response and good writing for on the spot ideas. i overanalyze and end up completely losing a story. i am 18 currently learning how to balance college and a job. completely single and hatin it at the moment. not desperate though. i also have freinds and a few relatives who are bi and have known gay men. ur right they are fun to hang with. my view is that i have no right judge relationships such as that. it is their life and all i ask is they respect my lifestyle and i'll respect theirs. it's always fun teasing men. i'm straight myself, which is probably why i read yoai, yuri just doesn't appeal to me.
i hope u don't think i'm pressuring u to write quicker. i completely understand that it takes time to write. i was late or wrote half-a**ed works for my creative writing teacher at times when i couldn't write anything. i have read some of ur other stories and liked a few n some were alright. i respond to this one because it really appeals to me. but i look forward to any new stories u write. again thanks for the response and no pressure but until next time. Ja ne!
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From Vyper on March 08, 2009
Well, if you wish to get to know me, I am 36 years old with a 13 year old son and a husband who is serving in the Navy. I was in the military, but no longer. It would be considered taboo in the Navy to write what I do, but my story is not who I am. It is a part of a great and crazy imagination. Not everyone understands this. I have gay, bisexual, and straight friends so I try to write a little of each in every story. Funny part is that many readers are Mothers, not gay, but find bliss in enjoying a good story with some sexual male/male encounters. I think part of this is our husbands like lesbian porn so much that we get sick of it so it is like almost a rebellion since we want to see hot men, not hot women. Nothing against lesbians or bisexual women, I just don't swing that way, but since I have friends that do I know about it thus it makes it easy to write about such things. My gay male friends were much more entertaining and amusing with their 'he is so hot I want to tie him up and make that straight boy change his mind about men loving men' personalities. My husband gets hit on by gay men often because he is so 'manly' with all his chest hair and rugged good looks. I find that hilarious and mention the preverbial sugar daddy on occasion just to raise his hackles.
Anyway, nice to meet you and hope you do recomend my story. I would like more reviews, but I am just happy people are enjoying it. I try to update new chapters quickly, but I am kind of in this dang writers block mode where I have a great idea, but it isn't complete yet. I don't write my story beforehand. All this is inspiration via at the moment it happens. It is either there or it is not.
So my dear fan know I am pleased to get to know you too and I hope to hear more from you in the future. I have several crazy stories and if you like this one you would probably like 'Too Much Time On Their Hands'. I am trying to write the sequil to that one, but it is definately a block there. I will continue it later since this one is taking up the time I would use to finish other stories. I want to finish this one, but I am in no rush. Your ideas do help and your reviews continue to inspire me to continue writing. The more I hear in feedback the easier it is for me to continue.
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 07, 2009
i understand. honestly i was just curious who u were and all that. u know just trying to get to know the author and all that. it's not only ur fics that inuyasha has a lot of trouble which is partly why i said what i did. i'm glad u responded. yes i uderstand the whole villain keep the plot going thing. i was a writer myself and am an avid reader. again thanks. not going to ask for what's happening next. don't much care for spoilers. takes away from the excitement. i'll try to get others to read this story if u want. til next time. hasta la vista!
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From Vyper on March 06, 2009
Have patience and faith in my writing. I don't always talk on my reviews, but I will for my fans and I wish I had more reviews to be honest, but heck as long as people are reading I am happy.

I don't want to give away any ideas that will show up all of a sudden since twists and turns make a story turn one plot into many possibilities. If you think Inuyasha is suffering, well.....let's just say he won't be the only one and without a good villian the story will end too soon.
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 06, 2009
i swear u did that on purpose. honestly. at least u didn't bring daddy spider back but now u bring in another bug. sigh. i understand it keeps the plot going but inu just doesn't get a break. i swear something about him just atrracts people good and bad. almost tempted to say that everyone has a crush on him but that isn't reality. neways, would u be willing to converse with me reviews wise. just kinda curious. well, til ur next update. auf wiedersehen!
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 05, 2009
awww... things didn't work out with Kagome. i hope him mating Heather doesn't cause problems later. lazy kouga shpuld have found his mate. didn't u say that elizabeth would be kouga's mate. mebe... well... please update soon! sayanora!
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 03, 2009
thank god he is DEAD! plz don't bring him back. i really hate it when people can't just leave him in the grave. poor sessh has gone through a lot. i think u like tormenting him. makes sense that naku would torment inuyasha the most. i swear inuyasha is probably the most sought after. til ur next update. chao!
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From ANON - k lave demo on March 01, 2009
wooww... poor mirage. she's got a strong character. i didn't expect u to go that far with the angst. and now naraku's back. finish him off good please. other than mirage. i really like ur character scales as well. did he bring that guy into being or is he guilty because he wasn't able to stop it in time. i really like when u do a major update. it's a shame not many others review and give an opinion.till next time. chao!
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From ANON - k lave demo (fromerly known as k) on February 26, 2009
wheeee! i love u.(not literally) not many people update so quickly! i liked that you introduced us to the uncles some more. I was considering requesting u to do so. poor Blades. they're som mean to him. i like the idea of sesshou having a crush oh Scales. it's interesting, imagining him following someone completely smitten when it's usually the other way around. u certainly keep me on my toes. I have no idea what to expect. i like how inuyasha will always have a special place in sesshou's heart. one suggestion, i have this idea of someone running up to Sesshou yelling FLUFFY-chan! while glomping him. of course Sesshy will be ticked if not seriously annoyed. I suggested it because i can imagine Mirage being the only one to get away with that (or crazy enough to do it. just a suggestion if u wanted to use it i think it would be hilarious. neways, til ur next update. chao!
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From ANON - k on February 23, 2009
I absolutely love the concept of ur story. though i must be honest u do lose me at times w/ the explanations. I absolutely love ur character Mirage; she makes me laugh so hard. i realized u don't have many reviews which is a shame and thankfully grammar isn't bad. a few mistakes but nothing that takes away from reading. i agree with ur sentiments on too many sex scenes and u along w/others have corrupted me. neways, now that i've rambled, looking forwards to the next crazy update.
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From nchsmi on February 10, 2009
WOW! I just found this fic and it's totally awesome!!!!! Your plot is grapping and full of suspense!!!! I just love it! Is there anyway that U can send me word as to when your next updates are? If so I'm @ nchsmi8@aol.com. I would appreciate the heads up! Once again- Awesome fic.- B reading U!
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From Vyper on February 10, 2009
Hello my fans. I am updating this story with some different limes and lemons to kind of move the time line up a bit slower so we can see the years I missed that Sesshoumaru, Kouga, and our poor little blind Inuyasha cope with things before I add the other chapters I removed. They will move onto the future, there will be a mating of a female to all males. This is not just M/M, it is Moresomes too, however those will come later. For now I will stick to the mainly male male script. I hope that you enjoy this since I did end it rather abruptly.
This does read a bit like a soap opera so do not be suprised if some of it does get a bit drawn out. Drama is like that and so is life. I am also writing about cartoon people's lives so they will do some boring stuff to some. If you can get through it all though this is a rather good story.
I also added a bit of a mystery suspense thriller kind of theme since I figure someone is always after the Inus to destroy them. Still, do not fear, tensaiga is still here.
Enjoy.
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From Vyper on December 07, 2008
I write this kind of like one of those soap opera's on TV. Ya know the guy get's his head chopped off, but he didn't really die he was just on a head hunting expedition that went wrong so now he is back although his brain shrunk even though his head is just fine so he can still be the hot guy on the show even if he is a blind deaf mute mime. Jaken is dead in my story, so does it matter anymore what he was? He is dead afterall. Not really a major part of the story, he dropped off unless I bring him to life and then I have to explain how he was brought to life and I already had to go through that with playing God with Sesshoumaru with Kouga and his problem with Inuyasha's fleas although the mutt boy only has like one of them. Am I making sense? Probably not, but that is ok. The whole thing is based off of impulsive imagination. It flows, grows, and turns into something........something.......well ya, something. That is what it turns into. So read have fun and I will keep writing. If you don't like than leave a message.....oh you did. Ok no problem, still ain't changing it. Do you how fricking long it takes to edit something? I do it a lot and I am telling you at some point I have to find a life. Otherwise........well.....that is personal question.....do I have a life......I plead the fifth. Now if any of this made sense raise your hand if not continue on with more important things other then my babbling. Good day to you all........I am going to write........rasberry jam all around.
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