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Reviews for The Strategist, the Leader, the Infiltrator, and t

By : Coccio
  • From ANON - jojo661538 on June 29, 2009
    WHAT WHAT I THOUGHT SEESHOUMARU WAS GOING TO ATTACK THE GROUP....SORRY FOR THE CAPS THING ITS STUCK ^_^ ANYWAYS KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK I HOPE TO READ FROM YOU SOON ^_^
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 07, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From rowdygirl on October 20, 2007
    very clever plot twists, love the 'dark angel' inclusion - gives kagome some equity. you need to have someone proof your work though, i think the problem is you are thinking faster than you write and you miss some words and/or transpose words. just get a beta and you should be golden! looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Xylinia on October 16, 2007
    This is really good so far. I felt like it started kind of bluntly, without many introductions or descriptions of the characters. Since it does start as soon as they come to the past I can understand how the story kind of starts in the middle. I look forward to more chapters.
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on October 12, 2007
    YaY you updated well I love it give me more lol!!!! its almost sad your going to make kazuhiko and kags not be together their too cute.
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on October 08, 2007
    MOU!!!!! Even If I'm the only one please update I love this story don't keep me waiting soo long pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on October 06, 2007
    I really do enjoy this I love a strong Kagome pisses me off when she's weak can't wait for what happens next even though it loosely follows the anime I still adore it please update soon I'm addicted

    Loves Arry
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