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Reviews for To Find You Again

By : mle
  • From ANON - Lori on January 14, 2008
    Wow! That was a really intense chap 9! Poor Kouga.
    Questions: So is Rin's father related to Naraku? Are they brothers? And just to be clear, Rin is human, right?
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  • From mteagle128 on January 14, 2008
    Oh my. This was a very well-written chapter, very fast-paced and intense. I was actually in shock reading some parts. I truly feel badly for the little girl, even though she was a fictional character. I say anyone who does something like that to a kid should be . . . well, very, very, VERY bad things should happen to them---things that results in a horrible, gruesome death. (Sorry, I have very strong opinions about this.)

    I only noticed one spelling mistake ("fieces" should be "feces"), nothing major.

    Good luck with the next chapter. Hope to read it soon!
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  • From kagome2004 on January 13, 2008
    *sheds a few tears for kouga* he was hot and annoying all at the same time. he will be missed. i hope sesshomaru kicks some major ass...poor rin and poor kagome. rin's father and naraku need to die asap....get em sesshy. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on January 12, 2008
    I knew Rin's father was involved with the little girls killing. But I do not know what his relationship with Naraku. Is Rin's father Narakus's father? Why did you had to kill Kouga. Why could you find a nice girl for him instead of kiling him? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on January 12, 2008
    Oh man!!!! I knew some stuff so going to happen, but...OH MAN!!!!!! Kouga dead!!! Rin is so going to blame herself for that!!! This chapter was action packed!!!! I only hope that Rin will be able to tell Sesshomaru what happen in her childhood!!!!! Keep it coming!!!!
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  • From ANON - kagome2004 on January 08, 2008
    OMG!!!! I WILL BE YOUR BESTEST FRIEND IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD IF YOU KEEP UPDATING!!!!....THIS STORY HAS ME ON MY TOES. I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP. UPDATE SOON PLEASE.
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  • From ANON - Lori on January 03, 2008
    Oh wow! Kagome is CSI?! And here I was thinking she's just a house-wife in the story. Heehee...
    I'm so glad you brought in all the other main characters like Sango and Miroku. When the latter showed up, I was waiting for him to crack his usual pick-up line, and he didn't disappoint. LOL!!! IMO, I think that you've kept everyone in character...that's hard to do, hats off to you! *HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!*
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on January 02, 2008
    Please!!!!!... Did Sesshomaru really think that Rin was going to stay at his house?!?! The next chapter should be really good....Happy New Year!!!!! ;)
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  • From ANON - Irivel on January 01, 2008
    Your story is great. At first i thougth the plot was acceptable, but then a read the chapters and, i have to say, your plot is very very good (the policial part is great). And you update fast too!
    I will keep reading your stories.
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  • From mteagle128 on December 30, 2007
    Another excellent chapter! I could feel the tension and anxiety of Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha and Taisho. (Only saw one apostrophe typo, no biggie.)

    Happy New Year! I'm looking forward to the next installment. ^_^
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 30, 2007
    They are getting close to the killer. I hope that Rin and Kagome are not way over their heads. Happy New Year and update soon.
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  • From mteagle128 on December 27, 2007
    Yet another great chapter! The conference room scene was intense!

    I did notice a word usage issue in the scene with Inuyasha and Kagome. It said, "Her body shuddered under his menstruations and she could feel him smirk against her neck as her head lulled to the side involuntarily." The "menstruations" in the sentence refers to that time of the month, which I don't think you meant. I think you might have wanted "minstrations" instead (I think that's how it's spelled ^_^).

    Happily awaiting Chapter 8 . . .
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  • From ANON - New Fan on December 26, 2007
    Poor Kikyo, her death was brutal. I hope that she has given enough information to Inuyasha to help find the killer. Update soon
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on December 26, 2007
    I would like to see Sesshoumaru and Rin alone for a few hours talking or whatever but I think they need some time to talk about things that have happened.
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  • From Chikage on December 26, 2007
    Oh The freaking suspense is killin me! U better update SOON! *pretty please* It seems 2 me that Rin is in more good graces w/ Inu Taisho than Kagome despite Rin being separated w/ them 4 a long period of time and Kagome just the oppposite. Do I sense favoritism of daughter in law here hmm..? Again, pls. update SOON!
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