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Reviews for Captured and Trapped

By : StephanieG
  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 04, 2008
    OMG I was terrified that naraku was gonna brutally rape her, it sure sounded like that from sesshoumaru's perspective, but at least some sort of torture would have to pass for it to make sense. Naraku's little confession and the end of the chapter had me spinning, he wants kagome, I dont know if to be grossed out or not...lol. So please update soon and I am still looking out for that sequel to that brilliant story "In the Elevator"...sigh. Keep up the good work and update, update.
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  • From ANON - puppydog on November 03, 2008
    What! No! More please! Do more! That last chapter was not nice! More please?
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  • From redrubycutie on October 30, 2008
    i was starting to get sick by think of him and kikyo ewwww! Good chapter please update soon
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  • From EnteralDarkness on October 29, 2008
    This is getting so good!!!! Update!!!!! Please and thank you!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - kat_me on October 29, 2008
    YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! Wooooo! yah... that was... slow, that chapter did not really have the same momentum as the others. dont get me wrong! it was good! just not quite up to par, oh well the next one looks promising.
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  • From ANON - ohsnaptheresa on October 27, 2008
    interesting read so far! please continue with the good work :] i'd love to read more from you! if possible, can you e-mail me at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo.com once you've updated? thanks and keep it up!
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  • From snowbird on October 11, 2008
    You've got me concerned and in a bind. I could put up with her being tortured but I cringe at the thought of her being sexually tortured by Naraku and/or the others. If that happens, I don't know if I'll stay with the story. I mean no offense to you or any writer that puts that in their plot, but each reader has their preferences. That's what makes up a diverse audience of fans. So I shall wait and see.
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  • From redrubycutie on October 05, 2008
    this chapter was good please update soon
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  • From katme on October 05, 2008
    ohhh, this latest installment gave me chills! are you going to stick with sessys. pov.? Or will you switch over to kagomes? I know some people just cant wright a good rape scene but I hope your not one of them. Keep up the good work and gods speed!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 21, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on September 09, 2008
    helluva chapter it was so good, and sooo long awaited, I am an avid reader of this fic since its beginnings over on FF.net, and I saw u posted here, by chance as well. I hope u keep the chapters coming, and the part where she needed to relieve herself was priceless, and I was so embarassed, I still have a tinge of pink on my cheeks...lol. But I loved how u also made it out to be that he now learning everything about kagome from scratch, and the way she had to tell him bout kikyo and inu's past and naraku's false powers, I loved it, made all the more real and important in this fic. Again keep up the great work and please continue updating, and dont leave us for a long time again.
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  • From LadyVorlana on September 08, 2008
    You're welcome hun. If you need anymore help just lemme know
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  • From LadyVorlana on September 04, 2008
    Hey hun. I am really loving your story and I am sorry to hear about your beta problems. If you ever need any help, lemme know. Just send me an email at prettyartist526@yahoo.com

    I really hope to see more of this story soon, it is really intriguing!
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  • From snowbird on August 30, 2008
    Please! It's been 3 months since the last update. If for some reason you can't update, at least give us an A/N.
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  • From snowbird on July 26, 2008
    Where are you?????? The Elevator has been completed for a while now so there should be an update here. I'm whining because I love this story so much. If for some reason you can't update, then do an A/N. Just give us something.
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