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Reviews for I thought I lost you

By : quittie
  • From ANON - mcdgoddess on February 08, 2008
    I really like the concept of this story and how you were able to change the history that we usually hear concerning Inuyasha. Several people try to do this, but tend to fail. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From szaugg on February 08, 2008
    Oh, poor little sesshoumaru.

    and here they were kicking ass and now he found his honey and he's gone.

    bet it's fun when he finds him again, heh.
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  • From wolfluv on February 08, 2008
    I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

    It is unique and awe inspiring to say the least! Just one little complaint though Sess should have been his equal at least??? But I love the cliffy!!! Both Inu's brothers Love him what kind of triangle is that going to be??? DAMN!!!!!!!!

    THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE!!!!
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  • From szaugg on February 08, 2008
    Well that was quite different, nice little touch of traditional fantasy. and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From KIKI441 on February 08, 2008
    well chapter 2 did answer my question about elvira
    knowing about inuyasha. does his brother and sister
    know that inuyasha is really a demon? and will the
    spell that's hiding his dog ears disappear when
    inuyasha realises that he is a half demon? i ask
    because i think his sister would like most women
    go crazy over those adorable ears.

    well, update soon. i'm dying to see the fight
    between inuyasha and sesshomaru.
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  • From mamarita on February 06, 2008
    So far, in chapter 1 you have set up the premise for the rest of the story. It's interesting. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I do hope this has a happy ending. I hate stories that don't. hehe.... DLS
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  • From KIKI441 on February 06, 2008
    this was very interesting though i am wondering
    what time period they are in. i say that because
    you mentioned inuyash putting on a polo shirt and
    a trench. i am assuming you mean trench coat.

    plus when inuyasha's mother was sending him away,
    she called out elvira's name. so does she know
    that inuyasha is izayoi's child and if so, why
    hasn't she told him. or will she tell him when
    she returns from her trip?

    and also you made a few pronoun mistakes. some sentences
    you were referring to izayoi as 'he' but other than those
    two little minor complaints, this sounds to be a very
    good story. i look forward to when sesshomaru and inuyasha
    meet and what made him think sesshomaru was his enemy.


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