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Reviews for Withholding

By : salomewilde
  • From orvida on February 29, 2008
    wow this story gets hotter each time i read it.and that's a good thing. what's up with jaken screaming and interupting the lovers and at such abad time can't wait for the next post to up.
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  • From Ppalae1 on February 28, 2008
    Damn, it was getting good until that big mouthed Jaken's ass had to scream and mess up everything. They both should kill the little green fool and get back to what they were about to do....... Great story can't wait to read the next chapter...^____^.
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  • From midnightsweet on February 28, 2008
    that no good jaken all ways killing the mood, and it was just getting good.
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  • From oddball88 on February 27, 2008
    Your story is very good. I anticipate your next update!!
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