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Reviews for Thoughts

By : mamarita
  • From Onyxlight on November 28, 2008
    Beautiful...I so love Miroku and Sesshoumaru as a pair.
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  • From ANON - skybluey on April 08, 2008
    ^_^ This story is so nice~~ I also like sesshomaru X Miroku's pairing. I think they are the cutest pair in the Inuyasha anime. Lolz~ I wish I have your talent in writing stories... you have to write more!
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  • From salomewilde on March 27, 2008
    Beautiful writing. If Miroku calls this "callous," he has no idea how gentle and generous Sesshomaru has been with him. Love the line about his being of so few words but better than the most skilled orator in his demeanor...or words to that effect. Very nicely done. (Makes me so glad you're reading and enjoying my Sesshomaru/Miroku fic while it makes me SO embarrassed I have for some oblivious reason not read and reviewed your stories! I'll read the sequel momentarily!)
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  • From YZZak on March 25, 2008
    I liked the writing style of this story. It's very poetic, lots of imagery, an just plain beautiful. I'm not too big of a Sesshoumaru/Miroku fan but I really liked this fic. Way to go!
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  • From GodOfInsanity on March 21, 2008
    Very nicely written, I see you have talent. And I do see sesshoumaru as the dom aka seme of the pairing Sess/Miro. I'm not really a big fan of the two (but I can see them together), but a long time ago I did write a nice little oneshot of them and Miroku was uke, just so you know.

    Now, in reply to the review you left me (I would have e-mailed you, but on adultfanfiction, the e-mail is usually hidden and I felt compelled to reply and this was the only way that was available to me):...Well, you have to take into consideration that this is indeed fanfiction. The real anime/manga Sesshoumaru probably doesn't even care for sex, let alone males or females. And some people see Sesshoumaru as Master Seme..usually an agressive and lusty sadisitc dom to most of the het and yaoi pairings. And take into further consideration that everyone has different tastes and that everyone doesn't think the way you do. That is why some people like Dommy Sess and some like Subby Sess. *shrugs* It makes things more interesting. I don't see him that way. Some people, like me for example, like and see him as an UKE, especially to Naraku. I can't see Naraku as an Uke, sorry.

    I (and other writers) play with the idea that very dominant and controlled characters like Sesshoumaru and Sepiroth, for example, long to lose control in some way. Believe me, being dominant in every way is no fun. It's actually very tiring. I should know. I can relate to Sesshoumaru in many ways (which is why its easy for me to write about him) and I'm telling you, I'm a very dominant and assertive person, but I don't want to be in control of everything. So...yeah.

    I have only one story where Sess is going to be dommy to Naraku, and that is in "Gonna get Thru this". The story is weird.. it has two different narakus and Sesshoumarus in it. Kind of a weird alternate universe where the feudal japan Inuyasha characters meet their counterparts, I guess you could say. I am eventually going to get back to it, edit it, and update it. And yes, in it, eventually the lord of the western lands will have the alternate teenage version of Naraku. Blah.

    I don't need to write any Sess/Nara since there's plenty of those out there. Just read those, then. And if I wrote that Real story again, it would be Naraku's thoughts on Sesshoumaru and claiming him. I don't really have time or the energy to do that. I just don't see Sesshoumaru as seme and you don't see him as uke, which is fine. But don't go around leaving reviews criticising someone because you don't like the pairing. I know I don't. I see a lot of pairings I hate, but its okay. *shrugs* Just open your mind and take all I said into consideration, okay? I did appreciate your review, even if part of it was slightly ignorant.

    Well, I hope you do keep writing, though. From what I read, it was very good and colorful. I don't get to see too much of that, unfortunately.
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  • From szaugg on March 16, 2008
    awww, yeah, a happy sessh/Miroku. It's so often so sad! I enjoyed it!
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