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Reviews for Of Gold and Adamant

By : Vyper
  • From ladykaa28 on April 11, 2009
    I don't think its just lust. Sometimes it is just sex, but if you are with that one special person then it means so much more. At other times its a need to show what words can't express.
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  • From nchsmi on April 09, 2009
    I still feel a little sorry 4 Choukichi. I can c, that he's still hung up on Shippo. I'm starting 2 think that little Fuu, will b getting the best out of this relationship. She won't have 2 b burdened with playing '3rd wheel' to Sven. Nice chapter, and as always...

    B reading U!
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  • From nchsmi on April 07, 2009
    Damn, Shippo has turned out 2 b a vicious little snit, hasn't he? He sounds like a miniture old Sesshomaru! Poor Fuu, I kind of feel sorry 4 her. Isn't she Sesshomaru's favorite child? I wonder how he'd feel about his 'little' girl being snubbed 4 another. Even if it is a youkai tradition.

    Great chapter, so far.

    B reading U!
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 05, 2009
    This fic is just too cute, but you have to find some one for Shippo's cousin. I feel bad that he doesn't have anybody to love.
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  • From nchsmi on April 03, 2009
    Sweet chapter. I have to admit, I'm wondering what Sesshomaru and Thoren's kids would look like. I hope they won't be too messed up. It would be a shame! Good chapter- B reading U!
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 03, 2009
    Well at least his cousin has stopped chasing him. Sven is a calmer person for him I just hoe that it will work out that Sesshoumaru will allow Sven to mate with Shippo after the first mating. How long will it take for Thoren to give birth? I know he can only give birth ot one colt at a time, but you never said how long it would take.
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 02, 2009
    Thank you for answering my question, but now I have another one. Will Inuyasha be able to sire pups/colts or will Sesshoumaru be the only sire? Whats going to happen to Shippo's uncle? I know that he will not be able to be near Inuyasha, but where could possible work without running into him?
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  • From ladytokyo on April 01, 2009
    GOD your on fire I love this fic. and the fact that I don't have to wait a month to read the next chapter. this is so good. what made you want to write this fic?
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 01, 2009
    Well everything is going good as long as no one over steps their bounds. Now that Shippo and his family are being taken care of whats up with this Lord Ken and also why did Sesshoumaru pick Inuyasha for a mate and not the unicorn?
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  • From ladykaa28 on April 01, 2009
    Poor Sess, well he has to face it sometime he is a daddy of two litters.
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  • From aleabeth on March 30, 2009
    Like it or not, child abuse is a relatively new term. Back in the day, beating your wife/child(ren)/slaves/servants was the man of the house's right... disciplining was 'natural'. So actually Hideharu wouldn't have really been acting out of societal norms. I'm glad that besides giving a different slant to the Yokai societal norms, that you also include mercy as well. Hideharu has performed an act of contrition over his behavior with Shippo by not only confiding in Shippo and trying to make amends, but by going to his brother with it as well (before it comes out otherwise). It's a start. It doesn't mean he's all forgiven and everythings all hunky-dory... but it's also not the focus (I don't think) of the story.

    You may have him coming about this 'revelation' quickly... but I understand it's part of your writing style to come to 'conclusions' at a faster pace rather than drag something out for several chapters. Thats okay by me. :) I'm not all that much into angst anyway, in fact it kind of drives me nuts when a character is all angsty or a situation is dragged on for chapters/months (hell even years!)on end. Real life can be pissy enough without it being perpetrated in the stories I like to read.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on March 29, 2009
    wow. sorry about ur past. i know what it's like to suffer emotional abuse but not physical. i'm glad things r goin well with ur husband. i hope u do let hidemaru change. i like to give people a second chance n do believe people can change but only if THEY choose to change n it seems that he is willing to change. likin this story but hopin u give golden eyes n update every now n then. wishin u a good day.
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  • From ladykaa28 on March 29, 2009
    Well at least he is serious about trying to get over Inuyasha and treating Shippo better. I didnn't think that he would have to give up being the lord of the east.
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  • From ladykaa28 on March 29, 2009
    I forgot to ask was your husband adjusting to being back home. I hope you all are doing well. Sesshoumaru couldn't maim anybody,, but at least he could see that Shippo is doing better for the moment. I don't think he should let him 'experiment' too much before he mated Fuu. I guess as a parent he wouldn't want someone hanging around his child treating her the same he was being treated with his own mate.
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  • From aleabeth on March 29, 2009
    ok... so I just 'dated' myself... *sigh*
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