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Reviews for A Royal Pain

By : Vyper
  • From Arianawray on November 05, 2010
    This story leaves me feeling sorry for Kagome, as she is quite lost, bewildered by so many things, and at this time, probably feeling very neglected by her mate. Sesshomaru won't care much for her, and at the same time only wants Inuyasha all to himself. I suppose they will all have to work things out in as mature a way as possible, otherwise things will get painful for everyone involved. I'm sure that between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha, there are still some details to work out regarding how they relate to each other. Also, will Sesshomaru accept Inuyasha's children and treat them well? Maybe even grow fond enough of them to be a loving uncle/stepfather?

    I rather miss reading your Love Everlasting story, which you haven't updated in a while, but I understand that it's tough to work through writer's block - as you mentioned in one of your recent reviews. Some writers find that simply writing stubbornly through the block - even if they feel as if they are producing utter rubbish - works for them. Others find that what they truly need is a break, doing other stuff, or maybe doing a different type of writing (factual, newsy or diary-like, as opposed to fiction). Whatever you do, good luck, and don't give up altogether, because writing stories, any kind of stories, is among the best ways to express ourselves and process the issues that we face in life :)
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  • From on October 28, 2010
    poor inuyasha. never going to see kagome with all the bedroom time with Sessy
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  • From KimIrvine on October 21, 2010
    It is an interesting story, I find it intriguing as to what Sesshy will do next.
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  • From ANON - Niako on October 20, 2010
    Great chapters! I really enjoy reading the story. Great character development. Thank you for all the chapters.
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  • From ANON - natasha on October 20, 2010
    really great chappie's soooo can't wait to see what come's next for inu and sess.
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  • From ANON - natasha on October 13, 2010
    ooooh that chappie and the others were really great sooo can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on October 13, 2010
    I like your take on the culture. It's a lot closer to the truth than most stories who take a modern point of view. Kudos for doing your research! ^_^ This is a good story. It's intriguing and hot. Hopefully, I'll be able to keep up with it.

    If you want to make it richer, try adding minor details. I still have problems with that in my own work and the smallest things can make a huge difference. For instance, a hand motion while someone is speaking, something that makes a scene more visually active, as opposed to passive. I've been lazy lately and have probably missed a lot of opportunities in my own work. When I wrote my first story, my daughter kept throwing the first chapter back at me and telling me to add details, but she wouldn't point out what. So, I'm just trying to help you add more color and motion because this story deserves whatever you can give it. ~_^ If you want to ask me any questions, I can find ways to contact me through my profile.

    BTW, thanks for reviews that you've previously given on my stories. I appreciate it.
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  • From Nesha85 on October 11, 2010
    Great story! I am so glad you updated the story. I can not wait to about Sesshoumaru and Sango bath. Thank you for updating.
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  • From ANON - natasha on October 09, 2010
    really great chappie's, i just sooo love them.sesshou sure like's to be f*cked by inu.(hehhe)keep it going.
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  • From InuNekoChan on May 27, 2010
    okay, strange question but.
    why was INuYasha raped in your story before he met kikyou?
    i mean, couldnt he protect himself?
    and even if he was human kick the in the guts or the jewels?

    i know you love inuyasha. but to make sessh look like a god here, that can kill anything with a slight touch and a very smart brains.
    and making inuyasha the opisite (while he is the hero of the show)
    is kind of annoying.
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  • From midnightsweet on May 27, 2010
    `the next one will be soooo great. looking forward to it. somehow i see inu in for a good show and tell
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  • From InuNekoChan on May 25, 2010
    I dont really agree what you said about InuYasha and Sesshoumaru.
    But you and me have difrent theories on these chars. i guess.
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  • From Nesha85 on May 25, 2010
    Great story. I like how Sesshoumaru is making Inuyasha work for him. I can not wait for the next chapter. Thanks.
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  • From Arianawray on May 22, 2010
    Ooh, this is a very interesting story so far! I can just imagine all the scenarios and permutations to come! Sesshomaru is going to be really demanding, isn't he?
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  • From ANON - natasha on May 21, 2010
    really great chappie's poor inu wonder why he can't get it up and keep going. well can't wait for more to come.
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