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By : Angels9191
  • From ANON - ImmortalServ on November 28, 2012
    Feel like i've been waiting forever for the next chapie!!! Plz update. Been dying to know what happens next.
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  • From LordYouko on November 24, 2012
    This is a well written story. I've never enjoyed a story with an OC as a main character before, but Kitaru is adorable. His submission to Sesshoumaru is so delicious and Sesshoumaru is exactly as cruel and sadistic as I would like him to be with a slave. As slave stories go, this is one of the few good ones. I'm looking forward to reading more from you - this story and any other slave/sadomasochism stories you plan to write.

    I find the idea that Sesshoumaru can subdue strengths more easily than weaknesses, interesting. It's true, I think. A master can't have his slave defy his control even in his weaknesses. A slave should only have those weaknesses that his master wants him to have.

    As for the village boys, I'm hoping Kitaru tries and fails to defend himself and Sesshoumaru comes back to teach them a lesson they'll never forget...and then punish Kitaru for not being able to defend himself.



    I hope you update soon.


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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on July 31, 2012
    No! Sesshomaru you get back there and save him! By the way super echoed i found the story i haven't read this in forever!
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  • From ANON - raelene on July 28, 2012
    ...........wow!

    umm okay still try to process what i just read! this was fantastic! your OC was well rounded and well thought out, i love him already! lord shessy is just the right amount of nice to make this a love/ propper bdsm story and not just a rape fic! not a lot of people can wirte shessy and make him that well rounded, usally they make him all mean, and that not right! i cant wait untill you get back to the castle, think of all the fun that could go one where you have unlimited rooms to have fun in!! omg! im spechless!

    i like the punishment aspect you have done that very well! it not just sex but acual pain and punishment, but still turns on your OC! deffentialy keep it up! i like the under water sence, it was differnt from the usal tied to a tree/ bed, and i belive if you can keep writing sence in unsal places and using the enviorment, so not just copy past in any old room but using all aspects of where ever they are, like the plant and the rock! also using common rooms like the bed room in usal ways, so not just having sex on the bed but maybe theres something differnt about it, and what in the bedroom that can be used for not its attended purpose

    and im a bit mean but please dont get to soft on your OC now that shessy has started to like him and if nothing eles respect him. cuz your OC likes been beat by the sounds of it and it would be highly mean not to let him be punished but his master every so often!

    and i know my minds like a million steps a head of everything, but it could also be good, depending on how the story acualy plays out to rember that the castle would have lot of servents/slaves alreddy there, and who they react and how they are orded to treat and what there orded to do could be intresting aswell.

    so yeah feel free to disregered all my segestions im just trying to give you an openminded view of thing that could be added if you ever get stuck! anyway i have like 10 million more ideas from your normal charter develpoment to extream BDSM ideas so you have my email from my review on your other story so if you need motivation/ ideas or are not sure if something would work feel free to drop me an email and ill give you another point of view.

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  • From butterflies1974 on June 08, 2010
    I loved this chapter but I have one question...How did Sess know that Kit was playing at being a dominate? Did I miss something? I can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From Arianawray on June 05, 2010
    OC characters, being unfamiliar to readers, normally seem less interesting and sympathetic to them. However, you have managed to make Kitaru a sympathetic and likeable figure capable of moving Sesshomaru with his innocence. I hope that whoever he is running away from won't prove too much for his new master to handle. They have to be harder to deal with than the rather silly foxes they sent!
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  • From kougaslover on June 05, 2010
    I must say, I usually have trouble getting into Original Characters in fandom, but you've done such a good job Kitaru seems like an integral part of the Inuyasha universe. Excellent work!!! I love how perfectly the characters have been captured, and the ideas are excellent. The stone in particular is brilliant. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 05, 2010
    I can't wait for the 'masters' to come and confront Sess I can't wait for him to kick their ass. I really like this chapter and I think that your character you developed is very sweet and I look forward to learning more about him.
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  • From Pumpkinpi on June 01, 2010
    Wow, water aerobics, creative! Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on May 30, 2010
    Nice OC! As for the story... Kinky!!! I look forward to more:-)
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  • From NAnderson on May 30, 2010
    so far so good ^.^ I cant wait to read more.
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  • From kougaslover on May 29, 2010
    That was nice, I can't wait to read more. I'd like to see what else Sess comes up with to torment his new slave.
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  • From kittyscookiesrus on May 29, 2010
    omg more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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