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Reviews for The Way We Were

By : sesshoumarusmistressofthewest
  • From KiraIsJudgement on November 14, 2010
    I like this story. It's is something different from the normal stuff. I also wonder where the baby is. Kogame just goes and does her own thing all the time and doesn't have any of the responsibilities of a mother. It seems like Kogame is one of those annoying teen moms that gives the baby to the grandmother and hardly does anything. I have no idea where the baby is for most of the story, he's mentioned a lot but only shows up like twice in 8 chapters and both times she is passing him off to a sitter. I love your world building and the communications between the characters, very life like. And the mannerisms are very funny. I have one request, please lay off the word god. Not because of a religious thing, just because you use it A Lot. And I mean A LOT, kinda draws my attention away from the story. Thanks and keep writing!
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  • From Tricia1224 on November 14, 2010
    I like thus story quite a bit. There are a few questions I have though. Where is Malakai when Kagome is out? I know her mom probably watches him while Kagome is at school. Kago e takes him to see Sango too. I think I just want to see more baby antics and Kagome interacting with him more. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter. Oh one more question, is Malachai a full demon, half demon, or other?
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  • From estelin on October 21, 2010
    this is really good keep up the good work. question is there a way i can add this or save this like a favorite that you can do on fanfiction.net and fictionpress.com.
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