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Reviews for A Twist of Fate

By : Darkinudemon
  • From DragonWine on April 26, 2011
    suprised he didnt killed her when he got the chance or something.
    wonder how sango would react if she hears the truth about naraku.
    but the story is allready over. so i guess i will never find out.
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  • From Sadistic-Taijiya on January 21, 2011
    The lack of reviews may be a result of unregistered viewers such as myself. But seeing as you doubted your work I created one for the purpose of reviewing.
    I really don't stray from canon MirSan, but this particular alternate plot really peaked my interest. Not many authors focus of Sango's dominant nature and I applaud you for using that potential so creatively. It didn't surprise me that Sango would be returning to Lord Kagewaki, though Kuranosuke-sama would have been my second guess. I wouldn't change a thing about the fic, it's written beautifully and ended on such a deliciously sinister note. Despite her blissfully ignorant disposition I'm loving Sango's role.

    Keep up the good work, and good luck at your job.

    ~ SXM132

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  • From kougaslover on January 19, 2011
    Ahhh, that's a straight horror movie finish. Sango and Inu being attached to Naraku...evil. Seriously though, I can't believe this didn't get anyone else reviewing. I mean, it was dark, but it was well written and some parts were pretty damn sexy. And such a great and twisted ending. I hope your move goes well and I can't wait to read more. I'd love to see you write one between Inu and Kouga or Inu and Sesshomaru, if you do them. Or, one between Inu and Ayame would be really good I think. I'd also love to see one involving chastity, perhaps permanent for one of the youkai. It's kind of like castration, only worse in a way that all the arousal is still there! Still, great work on this story, and I hope you have the best of luck on your move and your next story!
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  • From kougaslover on January 09, 2011
    Aww, poor Inu. Given such pleasure only to be guaranteed never to feel it again, so twistedly brilliant. I have to say, this story really is cruel but I love it. And, I have to wonder now, who is it that Sango is engage to? A human, Kouga, Sesshomaru? I have a feeling that this is going to get very interesting. And, I can't wait to see how Sango rewards Inu one last time, and if she'll really do it, though I don't see much chance of her giving Inu a break. Well, great story, and a great chapter as always. I really hope you continue on, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From kougaslover on January 03, 2011
    Wow, this was just...incredible. I feel so bad for poor Inu losing his voice box, but I absolutely loved Sango's commands. Making him stay on all fours like a dog...phenomenal. And the suggestion that he'll be servicing others, including males, sounds rather interesting. I can't wait to read more, and I like that Sango's rage seems to be subsiding (I hope). She seems to be a natural sadist, but hopefully that'll be the source of her dominance over Inu from now on, not a desire to kill him or torture him outright. Great work, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From kougaslover on December 28, 2010
    Damn, this one really is dark. I will say, the cockring sounds phenomenally sadistic and brilliant. And as for what I'm guessing is his destroyed voice box, Inuyasha seems to have really paid a brutal price for his foul language. Sango seems to be bi-polar in this, and totally off the wagon, poor Inu. Still, great story, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From kougaslover on December 19, 2010
    Poor puppy, this one definitely seems to be a far darker fic. Sango seems deeply, deeply disturbed. Though I suppose losing everything you know would do that. This one will be an interesting read for sure. BTW, odd point but I like that you have him as uncut in both stories, as he would be for the time period and in Japan, and being a dog demon, at least in my mind. Can't wait to read more!
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