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Reviews for A Heat to Overcome

By : Sparrowhawk
  • From Vyper on February 08, 2012
    I love this story, just bummed I have to wait for the damn bath scene. I want to have Inuyasha start enjoying Sesshoumaru's touches. I am glad though you are keeping it real. After being abused by that bastard it would be so hard for Inuyasha to gain trust again and Kagome is being such a bitch! I don't like her, but at the same time I understand she is a part of the story. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Hope it comes soon!
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  • From starchilds on January 25, 2012
    This chapter was wonderful. I can't wait for the next one. Suzu is so braizen, strong, sensual and intelligent it is amazing. He knocks you off balance and then reads you like a book. Walking in the gardens was good for Inuyasha. Sesshomaru's relationship with his mother or lack of has a lot to do with unemotional character. Sesshomaru needs to watch his temper. It still takes very little to set Inuyasha back. I know it takes time but seeing the brash strong spirit of Inuyasha cracked so easily hurts. At least he is recovering quicker. Kouga, Shippo feel the change in Kagome. Hopefully Kouga will get with Sesshomaru soon to find out what is wrong. Looking forward to the nrxt chapter. Thanks, Starchilds
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  • From AidaLily on January 21, 2012
    This was a nice chapter. I like that Fuyuki and Bishamon seem to be like soul mates. Its cute. I hope someone figures out and stops Kagome before she does anything stupid, but I realize that probably wont happen (her being stopped). Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were getting so close and then you made Inu scared of him, but at least he calmed down so they could rest together. Its nice to see Sesshomaru understanding and with the layers people don't see in a 30 min anime. I love when stories like this don't just show one aspect or idea of a character but show them more in depth and more well rounded.

    Now... Suzu... *hugs him* I can answer three of those questions. What position? Preferably his uke. What fighting style? Calm and calculated planning out each move. Men or Women? Women but I am willing to make an exception for him. XD Seriously though I love his flirtatious nature and Inuyasha got it wrong. Suzu is not just a sexually harassing peacock. No... Suzu is a very sexy, deliciously personified sexually harassing peacock. *nods and smiles* Can't wait to read the next chapter.. but I might need to fall back in love with the pairing of Inuyasha and Sesshomaru and not Suzu.. and well Suzu XD.
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  • From Vyper on January 15, 2012
    I love this story so much. I am so glad you wrote a new chapter. Sesshoumaru is being so sweet to his little brother and I hope the two of them can help each other to build that trust back up. Inuyasha needs love so much and only Sesshoumaru can give him the love he needs. I hope that Kagome is forced back to the future or dies. She wasn't my favorite character and could be very annoying.
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  • From starchilds on November 20, 2011
    What an awesome chapter! It was so dark at the begining and so calmly secure at the end. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have so many conflicting feelings to work out it will take some time. Inuyasha is letting Sesshomaru near him and touch him. His sarcasm is returning and so is his spirit. He even let Suzu hold him. Suzu is such an amazing character. He seems shallow on the surface but most of that I think is to throw others off balance. Underneath besides the assasin is a deeply caring and copassionate being. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks, Starchilds
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  • From Vyper on November 19, 2011
    Sesshoumaru loves and is in love with Inuyasha. He just needs to stop fighting it. He really does need his little brother. He would be so alone and sad without him. One day hopefully in this story he will see that.
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  • From AidaLily on November 19, 2011
    Yet another sweet chapter and it was rather good. Don't worry about Inuyasha's emotions being all over the place and people complaining about them. It makes sense considering what he had been through to have them everywhere and anywhere a person could imagine, so its working beautifully. Even Sesshomaru's emotions are where they should be for someone confused about his feelings. Now on to what I know you've been waiting for... (XD)

    Oh yeah I love Suzu. Reading him pinning Sesshomaru to the wall like that was rather... nice to say the least. Yes, I had a least one yaoi fangirl moment in which I read the mini Suzu being slightly dominating to Sesshomaru thing about five times before finishing the chapter. Oh and when he threatened to finish what he started (yes it was assassination, i know), it just gave me minor chills. I know what... I shall be with Suzu. Thats right. I am going to come into your story and be with Suzu. His wide range of emotion along with his flirty nature and sad past make him damn near irresistible. I check here every day to see if people update stories and when i saw this i was happy and reading the responses from you to the readers and when it said a bit of badass Suzu pretty much, i stayed up to read it. Well waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From starchilds on November 16, 2011
    I like your story very much. I read it over the last couple days. Inuyasha is slowly getting better. What's going to happen when Kagome, Sango and Kouga get there? Will Taka and Kano succed? Can't wait till the next update. Thanks, Starchilds
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  • From TamaRose75 on November 15, 2011
    I am so excited about this tory. I defnately can't wait to read more. I can't wait to see what happens with Kagome being poisoned and if she will end up with Kouga.
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  • From Vyper on November 14, 2011
    I hope Inuyasha gets better soon. It has to be hard for Sesshoumaru to have Inuyasha fear being touched so much. I want them to have cute pups together and soon.
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  • From Kitsuna86 on November 11, 2011
    Kitty demon love! They would make a cute couple.
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  • From AidaLily on November 10, 2011
    I am happy they are back together again. Inu and Sessh seem so sweet together. And Suzu is just... fantastic, though I almost wanted to cry when he had his moment of vulnerability in this chapter. His backstory to working with Sesshomaru was really sad too. I could almost imagine him covering up with that look of sadness as he looked a the tiger demon whose name i wont spell in case i get it wrong. lol. I can't wait to read more as I hope Inu will be stay with Sesshomaru and I hope Suzu finds someone or something. Suzu makes me laugh and cry and I just want to see him happy. Maybe you should make a bit of a story just with him or perhaps a sequel to this one so its still Inuyasha universe set and he is still a general. I don't know. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From Pumpkinpi on September 24, 2011
    Inuyasha has always been as tough as nails and still is! It took little Rin to help Sesshoumaru see that, guess she got sick of her guardian underestimating her species! Inuyasha let it be known how he truly feels about Sesshoumaru! Bet the daiyoukai was happy to hear it!!! Great stuff look forward to more!!!
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  • From Kitsuna86 on September 23, 2011
    This is.... complete crack....But I love it, it's cute, more please.
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  • From midnightsweet on September 11, 2011
    i almost need to dry the mt eyes. ok about the fighting, but please don't break the bond the just started
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