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By : AikawaAkihiko
  • From Aalto on July 20, 2011
    Interesting and very well written, I can hardly wait for more.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 19, 2011
    I really liked this chapter you kept it pretty close to how Sessh would act and even how Inuyasha would act in such a situation as this. Although I really want to beat the crap out of Sessh for what he's done to poor sweet little Inuyasha I think despite how rough Sessh's youki is that I like his Youki alot more than his other part at least he sees how wonderful Inuyasha is and isn't blind and a brat. Can't wait to see what happens next I sure am looking forward to it. Also could you kind of let me know when the next chapter comes my email is brzachman@yahoo.com.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on July 19, 2011
    I didn't think anything weird or bad about Shippou witnessing it, except what Shippou was going to think of Inuyasha for not fighting Sesshoumaru off, but then you covered that base too by explaining that Shippou could sense the reaction in Inuyasha and understood how and why he was submitting. Especially considering that Shippou is technically a fox, and we're dealing with canine youkai in general, I definitely didn't take offense at the notion of him witnessing it or the remembrance of having witnessed his parents in the past. Can't say I blame you for the author's note about it, though, just in case. I'm sure some more closed-minded, conservative people probably would indeed have issue with that detail, but then...what would any of them be doing reading this story in the first place? ;-) Speaking of, excellent story so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Will Sesshoumaru ever realize that Inuyasha was just as much a slave to his instincts as he was, and that it wasn't really 'the hanyou's' fault? Update soon!
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  • From Nesha85 on July 19, 2011
    Great chapter. Poor Inuyasha mated to a mean Sesshoumaru. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 19, 2011
    nice
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  • From Vyper on July 19, 2011
    At least Sesshoumaru has healed Inuyasha. Poor boy is so frustrated and afraid that he doesn't know what to do anymore. I wanted to pound Sesshoumaru for being so mean to his little brother. He hopefully will notice how beautiful Inuyasha really is.
    I've been waiting for this update forever and it is definately worth the wait, but I hope I don't have to wait as long for the next chapter. I truly love this story.
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  • From Vyper on July 15, 2011
    Ok I have read this chapter again and it is driving me nuts! I need a second chapter and soon. I've got to know what happens with Inuyasha. How can Sesshoumaru sit there and blame the poor boy when he was the one going nuts on him? Sometimes Sesshoumaru can be such an ass. Anyway please update soon!
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  • From Nesha85 on July 15, 2011
    Please write more. I want to know if Sessy will be a good mate in the end. I know it is good to be hard for Inu in the beginning.
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  • From Enigma180 on July 13, 2011
    AH!!!! i LOVE this so far!!! Its is awe-inspiring!!!!!!! (sets up camp) S'more?
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  • From Angels9191 on July 13, 2011
    WOW. This is amazing! Not only is it extremely entertaining [and not to mention very very hot] but it is so well written. The sentences are so natural and flow so nicely. The characters are believable. The plot is so intriguing. There's so much you could do with this story I can't wait to see where it goes! ^_^

    Please write more soon, I am so excited to find such good writing and such a promising story on this site.
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  • From Vyper on July 13, 2011
    Poor Inuyasha. It wasn't his fault his brother went ape shit and practically raped his ass. I hope Sesshoumaru doesn't hurt him too much.
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  • From ANON - dar on July 12, 2011
    I am very very curious for the next chapter, I do dislike when sessh beats inuyasha around and he just takes it, but i do like a good fight! Thank you for this chapter and Dammit sessh better learn to appreciate!
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  • From jdbbrz27 on July 12, 2011
    Oh my god that was totally awesome and it makes me want more and more please oh pretty please. You just have to tell me what happens next and what poor little Inuyasha is going to do now that he's mated and possibly pregnant by his big bully of a brother and what the big bully is going to do now that he mated Inuyasha and possibly impregnated him with his heir. Also what will Inuyasha do about little Shippo man I just gotta know. You can't leave me with such a riveting first chappie and not give me more. It was beautifully written and I loved how hilarious it was with the fat salamander who wanted to mate with sweet little Inuyasha as if that fat lech could coarce gorgeous little Inuyasha in anything. Thank you for this amazing new story can't wait to see what you great imagination comes up with next.
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