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By : drcomalfy
  • From Vyper on November 19, 2011
    I can just see what Sesshoumaru is wearing and can't help but think how damn sexy he would look dressed like that although I like his long locks flowing around him rather then pulled up.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on November 18, 2011
    Cool update! I wasn't expecting Inuyasha to actually show up as himself, but hey, why the hell not, right? He certainly couldn't have risked going to the hotel in his girl-guise, as if one of the audience. Not worth the risk, plain and simple. But ditching the necklace somewhere between apartment and hotel and showing up like he did...hey he is the lead guitarist of the band and so he couldn't disappoint his loving fans, right? I love how you tossed in that snooty reporter and the 'mixed heritage' comment; and Inuyasha making eye contact with Sesshoumaru right at the end there then getting flustered and running off...perfect! Can't wait for the awkwardness that will be school the next day! Sesshoumaru won't understand why the new girl is all flustered around him, and of course it won't help that he'll probably still be acting nicer after his 'hanyou' revelation and Inuyasha hasn't yet but that two and two together. Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - yuki on November 04, 2011
    can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Deborah on November 04, 2011
    Great story. I am excited to read the next chapter.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on November 03, 2011
    Bum Bum BUM...nice cliffy. Why are they there? Guess we'll find out next chapter! I really liked this update, short but sweet. Thought it was a nice touch the way Inuyasha spelled out his concealment charm for his friends; a crafty way for you to spell it out for us, and I also noticed in his earlier reflection of Sesshoumaru coming to his defense that he apparently didn't put two and two together regarding his own comment about 'Inuyasha' also being a half-breed, and how that was when Sesshoumaru spoke up. So he doesn't yet know that Sesshoumaru is a fan of his...although I gather from your teaser that he will find out pretty soon! Good job, looking forward to the next update. :-)
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  • From Vyper on October 29, 2011
    I wonder if Inuyasha makes a beautiful girl. It would be interesting to read about that.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on October 28, 2011
    Cool, glad you updated, and I like what you did here. I like that Sesshoumaru got his head out of his ass early with the whole 'filthy half-breed' thing, and I love how you handled that, making Inuyasha famous but yet hanyou in general still face prejudice, so it got thrown in his face what a hypocrite he was being. This ought to be interesting. I'm wondering...will Sesshoumaru end up (reluctantly) falling for Inuzumi as time goes by, only to then later in some comedic climax of events find out who 'she' really is? I fully get what you mean about 'outlined', as in, you know basically what you want to do with this story but it's not actually written yet. I also know that when that's the case, sometimes the story can take on a life of its own, LOL, but just so long as you keep updating it it's all good. :-) Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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  • From ANON - arya on October 27, 2011
    wow, i already love it so far. Though I'm frustrated with how you're only posting one chapter a week. I really don't have patience with stories that i like, especially when i know that you've already finished it! please please post up the rest of the chapters!
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  • From ANON - Aurelia on October 23, 2011
    I loved the first two chapters. Intriguing beginning, and the characters are well written. I'm curious to see what happenes next!
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  • From SplendentGoddess on October 22, 2011
    Interesting story so far... So Inuyasha doesn't know who his birth father is? Wonder if it's going to turn out that he and Sesshoumaru are related. You said the elder daiyoukai was his father's 'only heir' but that doesn't necessarily mean anything since illegitimate children are not considered heirs, and I've seen AU stories before where it later comes as a surprise to them that they're related. Not that it really matters to me personally one way or the other, because Inu/Sess fics are almost always 'incest' fics. People just toss in a little made-up nonsense that to inu-youkai it 'doesn't matter' and that's that. It would actually be refreshing if it turned out they are legitimately not related to one another, simply for the sake of something different, but it won't be a turn-off if they are.

    And by the by, "Aiko" does mean love-child in Japanese, and it's a traditional female given name, but I don't think it hurts anything that you're using it as a surname instead. I wouldn't worry about it. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here. :-)
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  • From ANON - ladyukithe2nd on October 16, 2011
    great story i want more
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  • From nchsmi on October 14, 2011
    Oh wow, this looks really interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter to post!

    B reading U!
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