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By : kougaslover
  • From SplendentGoddess on May 09, 2013
    Good update. Looks like things are progressing in this universe. I was half expecting Kouga to corner Inuyasha at the end of the meeting and take him into a back room somewhere or something, LOL, but it can't be about sex all the time, now can it? Looking forward to seeing what happens next. :-)
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  • From KEdakumi on March 27, 2013
    Had to google that chase scene. :)
    Love the way Sesshoumaru is introducing himself to Kouga. :P
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on March 23, 2013
    ok, as usual, it's good, if a bit quick. i do enjoy it, but i have to pick on one thing...a phallus locked in for a week? how is he supposed to eat and you know...eliminate? and i don't know if you have ever experienced something like that, but after awhile, it gets to be quite, quite uncomfortable, to even painful... and of course i realize it's fiction, but ouch! lol. looking forward to the next update. which i have to congratulate you on as well. no one else seems to be updating at all. so Yay! you! lol. take care. XD
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  • From serialcabbit78 on March 23, 2013
    Ohhh Sesshomaru is gonna make that wolf wish he .. oh never mind.. lol
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  • From SplendentGoddess on March 23, 2013
    Oooo, nice cliffy, LOL. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Poor Inuyasha can't seem to get a break, no matter which story he's in, LOL. And I've just got to wonder, how the hell is he supposed to go to the bathroom? Ah well, but I chalk that up to a youkai thing. It could easily kill a human - what an embarrassing way to die, LOL - but for him it's probably just annoying. And he doesn't seem to have any real complaints, 'cause I'm sure, iron or not, that unless the stuff is actually enchanted he should be able to rip it off of himself with his youkai strength. In a genuine emergency one could also always go to the hospital. So if he's going to endure it and stay bound up for the whole week, that means he wants to endure it. And I want to watch him endure it, LOL.
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  • From nchsmi on March 22, 2013
    Great chapter! Nice choice too. Bullit was the shit!

    B reading U!
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  • From mikako17 on March 17, 2013
    This is a friggin wonderful love song/story to cars. I know nothing about cars, but I find myself googling the ones mentioned and they're just beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on March 17, 2013
    So glad to see that you've updated this one again, even if it was a purely 'car nerdery' chapter ;-). Also wanted to let you know I've been reading Test Drive, though I've been bad and haven't reviewed over there yet. I figured since I'd already been reviewing The List in the past that I'd better say something, lest you think I stopped reading. Looking forward to future updates of both stories. :-)
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  • From ANON - graypheonix85 on June 29, 2012
    Hmmmm, interesting story so far...but why not updates in so long, hmmm? Had some fun ideas, but no updates on inu's being broken in...heh. Okay, I was kidding on that, but seriously, so far it has been interesting, with some fun bedroom antics, but why no updates? Worth reading, afterall. Update again soon, ja ne.
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  • From Vyper on May 04, 2012
    I wonder if Kouga's going to be jealous of Inuyasha fucking Sesshoumaru. I loved that scene though with Sess and Inu. Hot! Sex and cars are always a good thing.
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  • From SplendentGoddess on May 02, 2012
    Woo-hoo! LOL, I wonder how long Sesshoumaru is going to keep Inuyasha hostage.
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  • From ANON - Inuhime on May 02, 2012
    I must say you melted my brain with that first part.. WOW! Sesshou wearing a plug... What else can I say... That got me right there... XD"" We're all sick puppies aren't we... Keep on writing amazing my dear. ^_^
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  • From botticelliangel on April 19, 2012
    So I wasn't as impressed with this chapter as some of the previous ones. You do very good with the descriptions as always, and good with business dialog between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. But I would have liked to see you write out of your elememt on this one; for instance I am left wondering about their interpersonal relationship building during their lunch, and well the rest of the day they were together. It just felt strange to jump from straight up no-nonsense business and description to sexual induendo between two complete strangers. Two complete strangers who happen to be in a legitamate business deal. I'm not saying there needs to be tons of romancing or anything, but unlike the chapter where it was surprise butt sex between Kouga and Inuyasha, there is no previous relationship whatsoever between these two. The overall feeling was very disconnected.
    As a reader I am a little bit frustrated with this, and I also have confidence in your ability to write. I have a feeling that my frustration on this chapter will be cleared up with the next one. (ah the downfalls of reading wip)
    Thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Vyper on April 19, 2012
    I so love that last chapter. Sesshoumaru is seducing Inuyasha and that just turns me to mush.
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  • From ANON - Inuhime on April 17, 2012
    That is evil leaving it right there, you do realize that .... *SIGHS* ....Amazing work... I'll be waiting patiently. XD"
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