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By : kougaslover
  • From SplendentGoddess on April 17, 2012
    Woo-hoo! Yeah, kinda short chapter, you're right, but that ending totally makes up for it! Goodie! Goodie! *dances in excitement* Super looking forward to the next chapter! Like duh, who wouldn't be? LOL
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  • From botticelliangel on April 12, 2012
    Hello again! This chapter shows a lot of progression. Loved how Kouga tries to get the keys. But in all honesty the enema thing makes me gag a little... so I just skimmed right over that to the clamps and other fun things! Cool introducing Miroku in this part of the story. I like his cautous side, and that he gives into racing anyways. I wonder if Sesshomaru's going to be mad that they were driving his cars so recklessly... maybe he'll punish Inuyasha? Great job again!
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  • From Vyper on April 11, 2012
    I loved the sex scene in this last chapter, but it was so short. I was really hoping to find out if Kouga ever got those keys.
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  • From ANON - tritetras106 on April 09, 2012
    I'll have you know, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter -_^

    Long time reader, first time reviewer...actually I'm not really sure if this my first time reviewing one of your stories but I must say that I absolutely love them and I take it you're into cars and domination lol ^_^ Really can't wait to see how the relationships of the characters develop as well. Update ASAP! (B.T.W. You don't understand how much I absolutely love the way you throw Kouga in there).
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo on April 06, 2012
    hmmm that's how I react when I am in a bidding war. which reminds me looking for a black 1967 Chevrolet Impala.
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  • From Vyper on April 05, 2012
    I just wonder how Kouga is going to feel when Sesshoumaru steals his lover. I think the wolf will be pretty upset that Sesshoumaru is taking his place in Inuyasha's heart.
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  • From botticelliangel on April 05, 2012
    Inuyasha's ebay attitude was hilarious and a spot on example of his personality! I liked the way you integrated Kagome into this chapter. She felt like the voice of reason, and had a cool and grown up vibe to her. Can't wait for the next chapter and the "fun" parts... lol plug...
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  • From Vyper on March 31, 2012
    I like the detail you put into these chapters. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From botticelliangel on March 31, 2012
    Ah, another chapter. You certainly write at a manic pace (a good thing). I liked that you had a slight diversion away from the main plot with Kouga checking out cars not meant for Sesshomaru's list. It showed his level of dedication to the job. I admit I giggled a little with the mention that he was still plugged. It would be funny if Inuyasha forgot about it. That made me giggle again... anyways great job!
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  • From botticelliangel on March 29, 2012
    Wow... I ended up rereading chap 3 twice. I was wondering when you were going to delve into sexual aspects of the story, considering the story thus far has been fairly technical and plot driven. But I was completely thrown off guard when you made that leap. There was aboslutely no build up for it... not that kinky sex needs an introduction. ;) Puts a good spin on things. Looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From Vyper on March 29, 2012
    Ok it is pretty hot that Kouga and Inuyasha were getting it on, but I would love to see a jealous Sesshoumaru take Inuyasha to new heights of pleasure and make Inuyasha his own.
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  • From nchsmi on March 27, 2012
    Ahhh....Glad to see that your back to the style of writing that I loved reading from you! Don't ever change again, boo! Damn whatever those other freaks said! This was great!!!!! I'm so looking forward to reading more soon!

    B reading U!
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  • From botticelliangel on March 27, 2012
    Hello, nice to see the second chapter up! You did a fine job with the description again. I appreciated that you took the time to explain how cars "age" in different parts of the country. Having grown up in Nevada and moved to Mass I have seen that first hand. My dad owns a 1963 pontiac lemans, not super cool like the cars you're describing... but it was my grandmother's so sentimental value. You wouldn't believe what the humidity did to the leather seats, awful. Anyways back to your story, very good description. The first scene of conversation between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru was good dialog, and I would like to see description not in terms of cars, but grounding what are they doing during the conversation description. Also what is "Concours quality"? The conversation about it was enough to let me know it is important (and I know I could just look it up... probably will...)
    Looking forward to see what happens!
    Good job, and Happy Writing :)
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  • From botticelliangel on March 25, 2012
    Wow. I'm hooked. I love that you go into such animated detail about Inuyasha's work with the cars. It shows his passion... and honestly got me into the story even though I know nothing about cars. Seriously all I know is that mine works good enough to get me places.
    Setting up the shop, and having it be Inuyasha's dream is an excellent intro to rationalize why he would go to such length's to complete Sesshomaru's list. :) Dang good job! Can't wait to read more!
    Happy writing!
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  • From Vyper on March 25, 2012
    I love this story so far. I seriously hope you will have a new chapter soon.
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