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Reviews for Spiel Mit Mir

By : botticelliangel
  • From asa488 on March 02, 2018

    First of all, I must admit that I hesitated in picking up the fic because I mainly wanted Inucest and wasn't sure how to take the other pairs. But I'm super glad I gave this fic a chance. Your characterizations are so on-point and believable, and that's definitely what allowed me to accept the pairings. 

    Your Rin is so accepting of the brothers' relationship and has an air of wisdom to her (albeit sometimes she seems too perfect). And your Kagome, although she's initially obnoxious, there's sign of intelligence to her actions that prevents her from being just annoying for sake of being annoying. Like one part that stuck to me most was when she's said to Sesshomaru, "you call me for what I am (priestess), I will call you for what you are (bitch)" or something like that. I thought that was gutsy!

    As for the brothers... oh man it's beautiful! I loved how you revealed Sesshomaru's curse through the eyes of Inuyasha, which made Inuyasha desire for his brother and to protect him. Poor Sess…raped, constantly pursued by males, needing to prove over and over he’s not a ‘bitch’. This makes the fact that Sesshomaru trusted Inuyasha enough to submit completely to him, and only him, even more satiable. Even better that he’s still powerful and in-character while being the beta. And then what happened in ch14…I was really impressed with how he pacified Inuyasha in a gentle manner. Overall, I love love the current dynamic :P

    I’m a bit weirded out by the whole ‘relationship’ with Inukimi and Naraku, esp when the latter is taking on the appearance of her son…And there’s still a ton of mystery to Inukimi…such as what exactly is this curse that she has, why she would prefer Inuyasha over Sesshomaru, who this mysterious past mate is, etc. I’m not sure if that last chapter was the end (as previous chapters said), or is there more? It doesn't feel concluded.

    All in all, I love how you reinterpreted a lot of the canon events. Tho it’s been 5 years now, I hope you find time and interest to continue. After all, Inuyasha still needs to receive his mark!


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  • From ANON - empires on July 29, 2015
    Hi! Annual reading of one of the best inuyasha fics ever. You're probably in a way different place in life now (and I hope it is wonderful), but I must be selfish. Is there anyway you could tell me how this story ends?
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  • From ANON - jack on May 14, 2015
    Awesome
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  • From ANON - syndey on April 09, 2015
    Next chapter pleaz I love this story
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  • From ANON - Christina on March 25, 2015
    Have you abandoned this story? :( I hope everything's okay!
    I enjoy your writing very much. Normally I wouldn't be into a story with incest, but if I'm being honest, your story is really hot to me. But more so than that, I think you do an excellent job of conveying emotion in your characters and really fleshing them out. That's why I really hope to see more from you one day...
    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - Chloe on March 12, 2015
    I read through all the chapters in basically one sitting! I couldn't stop reading; I enjoyed it that much. Do you have any plans to continue this fic? I think you've done an awesome job of weaving so many threads together, and I would love to read more.
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  • From SayonaraKuroi on January 30, 2015
    Please Update!!!!
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  • From ANON - empires on December 02, 2013
    CONGRATULATIONS! That's wonderful news and thank you for sharing with us!

    And honestly, I appreciate you taking the time to update this wonderful story that has consumed my waking thoughts to the tune of 4 rereads. I gobbled up the update and I am so curious to know what Naraku has planned.

    Looking forward to the next part!
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  • From ANON - empires on November 13, 2013
    That is wonderful news! I really do enjoy this story, have probably read it three times now, and glad to know there is more story out there!
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  • From ANON - botticelliangel on October 01, 2013
    HELLO READERS!

    I just wanted to say this story isnt abandoned! I currently have very little internet access, and doing this through a phone means no updates for a bit. Sorry guys :( I am excited to say that I should be back up and running soon though... maybe mid Oct or early Nov.

    Thanks for your patience ♡
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  • From ANON - empires on September 05, 2013
    I just read this story again from beginning to end and I enjoyed every word. I like it as an adventure, a telling of Inuyasha with a strong narrative. I like it as a character study and a way to examine the relationships and how they could work in this just this way. And I like it because it's hot as the fourth of July!

    But mostly, I'm desperate to know exactly what happens next. Does Naraku mate with Inukimi? Who is Inukimi's lost love? What will happen to Kohaku when Naraku comes for the jewel? Will Kagome ever come to understand what it means to love Inuyasha? Will Rin continue to be the bright and insightful center of this wonderfully messy love polygon? Will Miroku ever tell Sango why he was embarrassed when Inuyasha cares...laid healing hands on him? What is the true secret of Sesshomaru's mark?

    Please send part 18 or an email to ease my troubled heart!
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  • From ANON - TheCreeper on June 04, 2013
    Ah! It's been quite a while since this has been updated, I finally came out from hiding to say Please, Please don't end it here! It's such a well written and interesting story. When you would update this it was literally the high-light of my day.
    Take some fan-adoration as fuel! LOL.
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  • From ANON - sen on April 16, 2013
    I have been a fan of your stories ever since I read Spiel Mit Mir the first time around. I was very upset when your stories were removed because I would constantly go back and re-read them whenever I was bored. I am overjoyed that you have decided to start writing again, and, even though I miss the original, I love your new story just as much :) After hours of scouring the web, I was fortunate enough to come across the first 3 chapters of your old story spiel mit mir, as well as the first chapters of regenerist and shame. I know its not much, but if you would like me to send you the copies, I would be more than happy to. Just let me know and keep up the good work!

    sen
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  • From ANON - Silver on February 10, 2013
    wow... I mean wow.. this story is great.
    I can hardly wait for the next chapter.. and the sequel
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  • From ANON - empires on February 07, 2013
    Reasonably sure that this story has made my life complete. It is gorgeous with emotion and camaraderie and the way you weave the story is near perfect. Near because I haven't read the end yet. I'll be waiting!
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