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Reviews for Bloodborne Duties

By : Wolf.Blossom
  • From Inuyashalover on July 11, 2019

    I really like this story I'm hoping that you continue it soon I'm dieing for more. My theory is I think some how Kikyo is behind all the problems with the villages that vanished Within inuyasha's boundaries and the attack on shippo.


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  • From Shellnet on April 18, 2018

    Abandoned come on this was not bad shourt chapters but atleast one page ive seen realy bad ones you loose your pasword just stop writing


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  • From MsSpaceey on October 06, 2017

    It's really good so far. I hope you get back to finish it. I like the conflicts and am looking forward to being able to read the rest. 


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  • From isisriku90 on October 11, 2014
    Another great story! Are you going to continue it? I know life can get in the way and creativity can wane, but I really hope to see more of this story. Hope life is treating you good!
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  • From EstherClemmens on September 22, 2013
    I LOOOOOVVVEE how you have written the dynamic of their relationship. For me, being a mushy romantic, it is a truly difficult task to keep these two in character while building their relationship. You make it seem effortless.
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  • From ANON - Kierstynfb on September 15, 2013
    Amazing!!! Cant wait for more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reanon on September 08, 2013
    PLEASE keep going with this!!!!

    You have me hooked!!!! Please, PLEASE! The second I get some cash, I'll send you some via Paypal if you keep this going!!!

    This is feeding my imagination, which, as an adult is really what I need!!!

    AMAZING work!!!!
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  • From BlueDragon on June 03, 2013
    I was finally able to catch up after a long hiatus of not having internet access. Halfway through chp 24, I said "Oh no!", scrolled to the bottom, reaffirmed that I could go no further, and sulked at the monitor. Lol.

    I think you're doing a great job with this storyline. There's still spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing that really makes me pause to mentally correct for very long. I can't help it, really. It's one of my OCD issues. Forgive me.

    Keep up the good work and please ask your beta what "clow" means for me! I'm still very curious about that word, lol.
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  • From LadyLaran on May 21, 2013
    Amazing story..I laughed my way through parts of it!
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  • From Sagura87 on May 13, 2013
    AWESOME STORY IS AWESOME!!!! please update soon, I'm dying to see what happens next
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  • From ChristinaMcMillan on April 24, 2013
    love it expecily chapter 22 towards the end
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  • From alwayskougacola on February 05, 2013
    I'm still laughing about stud cupcake...
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  • From BlueDragon on December 18, 2012
    Hi there! I was a few chapters in to this before I realized that you were the author of Kindergarten Flirting. I like the story line and plot. I'm, of course, enjoying the dialogue between Inu & Kag. You have the funniest way with their banter and the lemons are OH so tasty. Regardless of if it's sexual, playful, or sweet, you really have a great chemistry going on between them.

    There's still a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there and every now and then a missing word, but other than that I can't really offer any 'cons' for constructive criticism. I find your alternate Naraku fight/death interesting. I've always thought of Kagome's spiritual powers, although a bit unrefined due to not being 'properly' trained, as being pretty kick-ass. So, I was a little disappointed that she had such a weak attack against Naraku, whom wasn't even scared of her arrows or purification abilities, even though that was indeed what killed him in the end. BUT, I got the feeling you were just trying to "Get on with it!", as the Monty Python saying goes, so you could get to the main theme of the story.

    I still like this alternate trek that the plot is taking. I really like how the curse fits in to the original canon. It seems to fit in naturally and doesn't feel too far fetched. I like the idea of this Dream Demon and look forward to your next installment. I hope Shippo will be alright :). A lot of fanfiction readers/writers dislike him as a character or paint him in an annoying light, but I really like him. He's a smart and mischievous little kid who just needs to learn to respect his elders, lol. Don't we all... Anyways, keep up the good work and keep writing!

    P.S. I have a question for your most righteously titled beta: Sakura-chan, Oh mighty Master of the Clow... What exactly is a clow?? Lol, seriously I have no clue. Is it like Haagen-Dazs in that it is completely made up? Either way, it's a cool name lol.
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  • From Bartimeaus on November 29, 2012
    Nice story man....i love the plot and the lemon...could you update early man dying to read the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Elena Alice on August 05, 2012
    I absolutely love this story cant wait for more!!!
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