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Reviews for Unexpected Circumstance

By : Neptunesdemon
  • From Zoha-Lixue on February 07, 2020

    This makes me feel so happy. I kind of wish we got to see Rin reborn but really this is perfect the way it is. I love how you didn't shy away from some more taboo topics. Of course the pairing was taboo but others like the loss of a child or the death of a beloved character. You stayed true to most everyone's actual personalities and I love it. 


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  • From SammyJams on November 06, 2016

    This story was wonderfully written! Thank you for sticking with it and completing it! I wish you would write more! And I give props to anyone who loves Harry Dresden as much as I do! 


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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on June 02, 2016
    I've never cried SO FAST AND HARD, that I'm OUT OF BERTH, My phone screen is covered in Tears, there are some thinks that I didn't like, Most of them I can't remember, I'm not Mad or Angry, Just Up set that You Just HAD TO have A Little Flower Blossom LIKE Rin DIE; But I THINK I Know were Your go with this. With Rins Death AND the fact that Sesshomaru is with Child, that comes with VERY SENSITIVE MOOD SWING. Most Commune one is Angry, Rage and a lot more that are Negative. I can give you Ideas for more chapters for this story or the other stories your making. To Talk (Type) to me go to ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on June 01, 2016
    OH! I almost forgot? Could you BYE ANY CHANCE NAME THE CHAPTERS AND GIVE A SMALL Summary OF WHAT THE CHAPTER'S ABOUT? IT'S JUST A THOUGHT.
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  • From ANON - Zena McClain on June 01, 2016
    With these Last Few Chapters, Scene Kagome came back, She's been Acting a LITTLE MORE LIKE Miroku, (In His Perverted ways) ever Scene She Left Shrine. When you had Kouga give up on Sesshomaru, I thought He'd try to getting Kagome to be His Woman (again); but when you had Ginta Whisper sonething to Kouga. At first I didn't understand; but when Kouga Asked for Minko help and when He said "I have some responsibilities to take care of." (With Minko being a Doctor for Male Demons only.) I knew then that Kouga had something to do with Ginta having the probability of being Preagent, with it being Kouga fault, Kouga didn't come back, it's Becaues Wolfs OR Demons of all kinds think of Demons that have no Mates, end up Preagent, thouse Demons are AT the B OTTOM OF THE TOWER. I THINK Kagome SHOULD MATE WITH Gintas Brother Hakka, Dearing the knight Kagome Changes from a Human Miko to Miko Demoness, with the same Color Hair as Gintas Brother; But a Darker shade (Close to Black). Wright (Type) to me at ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com. PS. Miko = Priestess. || PPS. I LOVE UNEXPECTED CIRCUMSTANCE & I WAS WANDERING IF YOU would MAKE ONE FROM NARAKU AND/OR KOUGA VIEW OF THE STORY. PPPS. I'VE READ ONE INUYASHA x READER) AND (SESSHOMARU x READER), BOTH HAD LEMON (SEX) IN THEM.
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  • From ANON - TheTwentyTwo on March 19, 2013
    This story was EPIC and I enjoyed every bit of it! Thanks for posting it, you are a great storyteller :)
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  • From ANON - Dinka on August 27, 2012
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
    I read all &, even tho, I didn't review individual chapters, I must say I loved all the detail on every single one...
    You balanced all the sexual contents and the fights in an amazing way, keeping me reading and reading...I was sad
    To read the end of the story..but i know all good things come to an end!
    The shinigami god had me thinking of Bleach with the way you described it lol
    I was sad to read all the many deaths, and happy to read about Rin's rebirth and Inuyasha being saved..good sense of drama in that chapter :)
    I loved how slowly Sesshomaru was changing and showing more emotions..and the involvement of his mother (loving her name) and the family he just came to know!
    Overall: i love your story!!!! :D kudos!!!
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  • From ANON - Deborah on August 02, 2012
    I loved it! You are a great story teller. Everything is so detailed and I loved the drama. Thanks so much for the stor. It was great.
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  • From CloudSister on July 29, 2012
    You! This story was freaking amazing!! Your mastery of images throughout all the chapters was so captivating and grand! The timing was a bit odd but just perfect to give one that jolting almost heart attack! And you kept the spacing between characters perfect! We were never with a character for too long or too short! This was an absolutely grand story, that has entrapped me this whole last week!! I love it!!! Thank you for posting this! And thank you for keeping with it all the way through. It is such a pleasure to have read, and I deeply thank you! You are as grand if not on par with the great 'Twisted Hilarity' and you far deserve acclaims as such!! I plan to read your other works, as I have no doubts as to your talent! Your 'authors notes' always had me chuckling and I read every one of them even as desperate for the next paragraphs as I was becoming. Thank you! I wish you luck in everything else you go for, I hope everything turns out as lovely as this is!
    And I must ask, did you mention Harry Dresden? From Dresden files? Nifty!
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  • From sesshyfreak on July 24, 2012
    I spent two days reading this almost non-stop and, as with all good literature, I'm sad it must end, but happy to be brought closure. You did an absolutely fantastic job on this story, to the point of me actually seeing it play out in my head. You were very good about keeping them in-character, and when they weren't, you were clear as to just *why* they were acting that way.

    Another point I was very happy with was your original characters, specifically Hiromi. Grown from my fear of Mary-Sue characters, I tend to keep my heart away from original characters, but every single character you wrote was amazing. Even the characters that didn't hold as many lines were very fleshed out and easy to imagine.

    As much as my heart screams at me, the deaths of Rin and Kagura were both also well-written, and tied into the story well. On that note, I did have a problem with how easily everyone handled Rin's disappearance as time went on. It seemed as if they were almost pushing along normally, rather than escalating as parents are wont to do.

    I really did enjoy everything I read, and I can't wait to read the Kouga/Ginta story that inadvertently led me here, as well.
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  • From ANON - Empress11690 on July 18, 2012
    PERFECT NOT over sexed at all! I thought the drama and battles were very insequece with the telling of the story and characters. LOved it!
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on July 17, 2012
    Well, I finished it. I can say I love when the characters are OOC, that's different and your Sessh and Inu were nice.Sessh's mother was something else, I liked her !! Poor Kagura didn't make it,bouhhh ! Hope you'll give us other intersting stories ... !!!

    Thank you,
    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on July 14, 2012
    Such a good plot, a good story, some very good characters ! Currently reading it, I find you earned reviews to thank you for going here on AFF !!!
    Thank you very much !

    A french mother,
    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth
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