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Reviews for The Heir and the Spare

By : Wolf.Blossom
  • From ANON - sheshar on November 21, 2013
    Yaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! You have no idea how long I have waited. You are seriously my favorite fan fiction author!! So excited you have no idea. No amount of exclamation points can express my excitement. Thank you!!
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  • From Sorceress0405 on July 28, 2013
    come on man update
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  • From satterb on July 17, 2013
    Love Izayoi in this story! Sometimes men are so blind. LOL I love this story and I can't wait for the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - foxy fire on May 08, 2013
    i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter. I wana know aht will happen when sess shows back up. and everything please please post the next chapter iam dieing to read more.
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  • From ANON - Az on March 27, 2013
    Eek! This chapter gave me butterflies,
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  • From BlueDragon on March 08, 2013
    Caught a few grammatical errors in the last three chapters. So, HA! There is a con; my only negative to give in a constructive review... (O_o)... I still like where this is going. It's entertaining watching Inu be charming instead of being a foul-mouthed, brat. It ought to be interesting when Sess is drug back in to the story kicking and screaming. Your response to Chp 5's cliffy made me laugh. Say what!? Lol. Look forward to your next update(s). XOXO
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  • From Lillium_Rose on January 23, 2013
    This story is beautifully written and has such a great storyline! I hate cliffhangers though! Ending right after they finally kiss is so very unfair to us readers. Please update super soon or I might pop with anticipation. =] beautiful job, and keep writing!! I can't wait to read the rest of your work. I hope it's just as good as this story! ={D
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  • From BlueDragon on December 19, 2012
    Okay, so yeah... I really like the way this is starting. I like the family atmosphere and love what you've done with Inuyasha. Although it IS only two chapters in, he still seems very much like his usual self only a confident, 'mature' adult. I love how he ran away from his dad, though. That was pretty funny :) And then Sesshoumaru running away like a spoiled brat, lol. I hope he isn't a cold jerk. I hope he's his usual stoic, dry self and very much a part of the family, just not right for Kagome. I didn't notice any type of mistakes, which is always refreshing. So, I don't really know what to offer by means of constructive criticism. So sorry, lol. I was just really into the story and couldn't believe I could go no further then chp 2. I definitely look forward to the next chappie. Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - SugarRos on November 02, 2012
    I love it, the story flows really nicely with just enough detail given. Can wait to read more. :)
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  • From Japanese-Power on October 24, 2012
    Can't wait for your next update! I'm so enticed! :D:D
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  • From botticelliangel on October 13, 2012
    good second chapter! really liking this so far!
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  • From satterb on October 13, 2012
    Even though I'm a huge Sesshoumaru fan, I really look forward to reading more of this story. Maybe it's because you've made Inu Yasha confident. He's lots of fun to read when he has confidence. Please don't make Sess too much of an ass though! LOL Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Adelaide on October 12, 2012
    In love with this story so far. I love the way you are portraying the characters. I can't wait to see where you take this story, the plot, the romance. :) Though I am trying to figure out how on earth Kagome can end up with our favorite dog-eared lover as things stand now. It will be very interesting to see how the story unfolds. Keep up the great work!
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  • From botticelliangel on September 10, 2012
    Nice start. I'm interested in seeing where you are going to go with this.
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