Reviews for AfterShock

BY : whitetiger9953

  • From Dunkelgelb on December 04, 2016

    Hi!  I'm not into M/M stories nearly as much as those that involve physical and romantic M/F relationships, but this seems like a good one.  At the very least, you've put a lot of work into combining characters from different fandoms into one narrative and making it believable.  Grammar and spelling are good and dialogue is interesting, even if I'm not familiar with every character and their respective anime/manga.

    What I feel most strongly about is that you're only received 5 reviews over 3+ years and 44 chapters.  Perhaps some reviews were lost due to database changes?  Or perhaps the popularity of InuYasha in fan fiction has waned since Adult Swim stopped running the first series?  That was several years ago.  I was about to suggest that you try signing up on AO3 and posting your story there, but it seems you've already done that.  However, even then, you may only be exchanging lack of traffic on AFF for too much on AO3; there, an updated story doesn't stay on the front page of a fandom for very long.

    Regardless, I hope you eventually finish your story!

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  • From ANON - solitare1 on September 24, 2016

    I really like this story! Brought me to teabrs a couple of times.

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  • From ANON - Nejis_soulmate on September 15, 2016

    You have me hooked. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. You tell a great story and you make all the characters believable. You also put two of my favourite bad guys together, Sesshoumaru and Sephiroth. I love this.

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  • From ANON - Lilian on May 10, 2016

    Just finished reading this story. Wow, it is really great! I love your writing; from how you portray the characters to how you dish out the lemons. A lot of the writing on this site lacks the ability to create a whole story and you did so in an awesome way! I can't wait to see how this ends/where it goes. (Also it's hard not to love seeing all your favorite characters come together 😍) So I'll just be over here worrying about Seph until next chapter haha! Thanks for this story!

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  • From ANON - eli on November 30, 2013

    captivated me this story please continue as soon as possible

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  • From God_of_Insanity on July 16, 2013

    Not a bad story at all. I once read a Sess/Seph story years ago and it was discontinued, I think. Not sure if it's still on this website, but it was good. It had a lot of potential. I love these two and together they make a nice couple. I normally prefer Sess and Seph both as bottoms, but I don't mind either one being a top to the other. Nice job so far and I'd love to see where this one goes.

    Btw I think the rape warning should be changed to Non-Con or Dub-Con.

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