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Reviews for Not Like My Father

By : Krissael
  • From smutccubus on May 21, 2020

    I know there isnt much hope for an update considering how long its been, but I really do like the story so far ^^


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  • From Starryice on May 05, 2019

    Please finish it!!!!


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  • From ANON - Chiii on May 18, 2016
    Please make it longer!! And update please!! It's getting interesting!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2016
    I love this story and hope you update soon. I hope Sesshomaru's decision was to mate Rin!
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  • From Krissael on December 14, 2013
    I would like to thank all of you who have read my story, and I appreciate the wishes for recovery! I am feeling much better, and I am expecting my child in May 2014. Unfortunately, for some reason my computer has been malfunctioning when I try to write on this site. I've tried it on other computers and had no problem, but I'm not often around other computers, so I apologize for the delay!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on November 29, 2013
    First, I hope that you are feeling well and I pray for your speedy recovery. Second, Thanks for the update and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Miriam on September 16, 2013
    Nice story you written so far! Hope you can upload soon!!!! cx
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  • From Sorceress0405 on July 19, 2013
    I love it so far I can't wait to read the next part.
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  • From ANON - Shelisa Morgande on June 29, 2013
    Please update soon I would like to know if they mated
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 07, 2013
    I finally got a chance to review... Very interesting story...really like the inner battle that Sesshomaru is having with himself.. But, to trade her like that....that was something else. Can't wait to read what other types of hell Sesshomaru is going to put himself thru into he wise up.

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  • From ANON - RinSess13 on April 07, 2013
    In my opinion, the fic was perfect until chapter 6. From chapter 7 forward I missed details and some explanations about what happened. I have sensed this change. It's my opinion, not the truth. I think it happened because your stress for have to study and all, but you know better. When a person describes every detail of the scenery around the characteres, or of the weather, or repeats the same explanations but using another words, it is exaggeration. But I didn't see it in this fic "Not Like My Father". As you questioned, I'll answer: I prefer short chapters. I think it's better because the fanwriter can update faster and, how there is just only one event or topic, the author can think better and describe it better. There is no overload. Long chapters can be confuse because they demand many events and passage/transition of time. And there is the fatigue. There are some one-shots that I need to take a break and, after, keep reading, because they are too long. But, sometimes, when there is an important scene like an action scene or a lemon, the chapter needs to be bigger. So, the author have to decide what is better at that moment. Sometimes, when the author is describing the character's feelings, the chapter needs to be shorter, because there is nothing happening and it can be boring, but the description of feelings is necessary. Also, you can post short chapters now, because you are still writting them and, after it's finished, you can re-post as other fanfic (to not lose the older reviews), but with the chapters joined and edited as you wish. You can do it here or in another fanfictions' site. Well, write fanfics is supposed to be fun not a duty, so, take care of yourself and good luck in your studies. See you!
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  • From ANON - Hattaru on April 07, 2013
    I think you are doing great, I really do, it is up to you if you want to re-do it and repost it, it really is, it's your story so feel free to do what ever you wish, I like it, alote, you should keep it up, and make longer chapters, that is what I feel, I love this story and I think it is refreshing, anyways you should try to go into detail on the next chapters, live and learn that is what I say LOL.

    I hope you keep this up, there are really not that good Rin and Sesshomaru fanfictions out there anymore they are all Sesshomaru and Kagome, and this story I adore.

    Hugs

    Hattaru
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  • From ANON - DemonChild132 on April 06, 2013
    So far this story is very good. I cant wait to see what else you pull out of your sleeves :) Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Hattaru on April 06, 2013
    I must say Sesshomaru is well making me mad, he changes his mind so much it is so like Inuyaha, and you would think you would have more of a one track mind, because of his up bringing, I do agree on what "RinSess13" on both chapters, He says he does not want to become his father, by falling in love with a human, and yet he is giving Rin mixed emotions, he kissed her in the last chapter, why would he do that? if he is so dead set on not falling in love with her? to me, he would in all honesty keep away form her and in some ways not to care, or not to care that much, I understand that keeping Sesshomaru in character is extreamly hard, because in the manga and anime series he is so complex, you see him have emotion but not that much, and at the very end of the series, we see that he gives her gifts, when she is older, but not really staying, I find that she is more of another servent to him but more vaubale than Jaken.

    I love this story, I just wish it was longer, and I hope to see Rin get a back bone, and not really see him as all good, because we all know he is not, He might be a gentalmen in some ways but he can also be a beast, and one can not be too careful.

    Hugs

    Hattaru
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  • From ANON - Hattaru on April 06, 2013
    Ok I don't understand! how did Sesshomaru save her? I mean she blacked out and then she wakes up and Sesshomaru is right there with her? how did he know were she was, and how did he save, her, I don't know why Rin is not too upset with him, yes he kissed her but "HELLO" he sold her well not really sold her but gave her to someone with out her consent.

    still good can't wait tell you update more.

    I really do hope you make them alote longer, they are so good the chapters I just wish they were longer.

    Hattaru
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