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Reviews for Secret Possession

By : SakuraAngel1
  • From Justicea on August 24, 2013
    I just want to say that I love this story. Your great at getting the emotions and descriptions down to where you actually feel what the characters are feeling.
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  • From katiekrm on August 23, 2013
    I'm hooked on this story, but I don't see how Sesshomaru is going to win over Kagome if he keeps murdering people and doesn't start feeling remorseful. I mean, he even killed the woman who helped raise him! I wonder if he'll bring her back. I hope Kagome puts everyone in their place with how they're treating Sango. Maybe Kagome can educate Shesshomaru on what happens to rapists in her time.
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  • From ANON - Jojo on August 23, 2013
    This is so heartbreaking. First, what Kagome has to go through and then losing one of her pups and injuring the other as she tries to escape... I really hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - Wii on August 22, 2013
    Wow. I'm hooked. The plot line is amazing. I hope kagome takes more care of her unborn.
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  • From ANON - lil kitty on August 22, 2013
    I like this story, I didn't at first just not a big fan of fluffy being a royal all about me but pretending its about you thing. I feel bad for Kagome, raped, then pregnant (and I like how you put real emotion behind her thinking of the kid I mean its your child but how you had it, alto of mixed feelings there) he needs to understand her a bit better after he cools down. I mean she was raped against her will, doesn't love him he'll doesn't even know it is fluffy. Oh well, keep going!

    P.s I'm sad that you killed off the one servant now I feel revenge in the air o,o
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  • From ANON - Guest on August 22, 2013
    This story caught my attention and seems most interesting so far. The foundation in chapters 1-3 are pretty solid but I'll be interested to see how it flows in the following chapters. The way Sesshoumaru is portrayed as loving especially in the first chapter even without Kagome knowing was convincing and he later showed it in taking her friends over to her.

    I felt the ending portion of chapter 4 was a little rushed and abrupt. It would flow better if the escape was expanded and a little more descriptive.

    The real test that indicates if Sesshoumaru truly loves her will probably show through his actions in the next chapter (5). Would he show care for her health despite his anger over the loss of their child or would his anger over the incident override his feelings for her?
    After all actions speak louder than words; how much does he truly love her? Does he love enough to forgive and understand her reason for escape or is he going to be a cruel captor?

    The servants in the household also play a major part in the story as it is part of the lifestyle he intended to provide Kagome as portrayed in the first chapter. However it is crucial to see how Sesshoumaru treats Kagome when he returns. His actions toward her in front of servants would be a true indicator to either prove her as a regular female to slate a male's lust or a mate (or Lady of the Western Lands) to be respected.

    The storyline in general is pretty strong so far. As eager as I and many other viewers are to see the next chapter, please do not rush the story. Any good story takes time to develop so rushing the plot is not ideal.

    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From kadajclone on August 21, 2013
    Oh man Sesshoumaru just keeps digging himself in deeper. This latest stunt is not going to make things any easier. Nice to see kagome trying to escape by playing the staff.
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  • From ANON - Mimiru on August 20, 2013
    I liked it, its different from what i read before, as in sesshomaru really doesnt mean be to evil to kagome or have bad intentions towards her or her friend, he does it caues he actually cares for her. Demons and humans do things differently, so its cute to see him try to work with her human beliefs. Kagome is going to have a hard time seeing that he cares for her and means it, also getting past her rape. I thought it was cool how you added that little twist of her not knowing who did that to her or who the lord is, i cant wait to see her reaction to that!

    Update soon :3
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  • From ANON - mystic_breeze on August 20, 2013
    This story is well written, all of the characters seem to be in character with the anime/manga. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Please don't keep me waiting too long, I hate forgetting key parts in the story when people don't update on a regular basis.
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  • From kadajclone on August 20, 2013
    like the fact that Kagome is pissed and not easily forgiving. the Demon women don't seem to understand why she is so upset.Damn wonder if Sango got kidnapped as well and regardless of how she came to be there Kagome is going to be pissed at her friends current condition.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 19, 2013
    You have me hook.... please continual. Hay start, very easy to follow and very interesting.
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  • From 1CarinoInu on August 19, 2013
    Squeee! An update! ~does happy dance~

    Okay, I'm going out on a limb here and guessing that demon/miko gestation-pregnancy is accelerated, yes? Because there is no way that she, as a normal human, could be pregnant yet. But you are the writer and are given creative license.

    Besides, I like your story, and I don't want to upset the writer!

    Atsuko is wonderul and I hope that she will be an acting mother to Kagome in her times of need. Kagome is going to be one angry bit**, especially now that she's expecting... TWINS! Lord almighty. When Kagome gets her hands on that demon. Sesshomaru should listen to his instincts, Naraku or not.

    Ugh, so much drama and it's only begun.
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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on August 19, 2013
    I am greatly enjoying this story, thank youbfor the prompt update! Your story is fluidly progressing into a battle of the sexes. It's understandable how Kagome and Sesshomaru feel in their own minds. Even your rape scene was tastefully and sweetly done. The willingness if her Ladies to please Kagome- beheading the cook!- is so touching evennthough b they can see she hates being there.I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From 1CarinoInu on August 18, 2013
    The road to hell is paved with good intentions. Sesshomaru has no clue how to deal with the female race - well, human females. At least he feels some remorse for having to force the mating before getting her agreement the way he wanted, but by running away, leaving her behind to deal with all that he has, she's not going to be happy. I'd be surprised if she didn't fall into a depression, initially.
    I'm curious where you're planning on taking this story. Thus far I'm very intrigued!
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