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Reviews for The Teddy Bear

By : DiryDaryPinguin
  • From ANON - Kristina Mitchell on June 17, 2016
    OH MY GOD!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!! LOL THIS STORY IS GREAT!!
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  • From ANON - Angie on November 03, 2014
    Oh come on, you can't leave it there! T^T What happened? Did she finally cum? Did they get together? Did he leave stupid Kikyo for Kagome who's loved him for so long?! COME ON! MORE~~~~ PLEASE~!
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  • From MissMarilyn69 on July 25, 2014
    Ah! No fair no fair no fair...you shouldn't tease hentai's like us with a cliffy like that... I want more more more like two minutes before I even stopped reading chapter three 😫...All whining aside very well done I wish aff had a reminder or fav system cause I definettly want to know the moment the next chapter is posted. Again well done.
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  • From sweetcountry on February 23, 2014
    I want to read more! I like the way you write.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2014
    Hot!! More please!! ;)
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  • From ANON - vechi on January 16, 2014
    Update asap....dying to know what will happen next
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  • From ANON - ceci on January 01, 2014
    Damn....this story is such a tease ...i will love to see the outcome of this story...this is well written and has captured my undived attention...please undate soon can not wait for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on December 02, 2013
    that was hot and dirty i loved it! plwase please update again soon :)im shivering in anticipation to find out what happens next. so how long will our sweet kogame last? hmmmmm
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  • From Vyper on November 21, 2013
    You are such a tease with these chapters. I want to se more.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on November 20, 2013
    i found this and NEEED you to update this! i love this war of wills that they are having and i dint want it to stop.... please PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON
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  • From Vyper on November 18, 2013
    I hope for more with bated breath.
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  • From BlueDragon on November 17, 2013
    Hahaha, Inuyasha's a horn dog.

    I didn't notice many grammar/punctuation mistakes, so good job on that. The only thing that caught my attention was your phrase "drop more ashes in the fire". Maybe because I'm a pyro and burn things any time there's cool weather, but I don't think that's what you want to say there. Adding ashes to a fire would put it out and I don't think you want that to happen in this case, lol. The idiom is "add fuel to the fire" or something like "dropping a lit match on a pool of gasoline."

    Anyways, this is a good start. You've got some good chemistry brewing here and I'm looking forward to what's next.
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