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By : GrimLyght

From ANON - serene on May 14, 2014
I really like this story. I can't wait to see what happens in the future! Looking forward to the next chapters!!!
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From ANON - Colouredblossom on May 12, 2014
Oh my goodness, every time I read another one of your chapters for this fanfiction I am left in awe. I always enjoy them, and look forward to the next update. This chapter in particular was very well done - and that climax at the very end, it leaves me wondering what Kagome will do with the newly attained information and just how she will help Sesshoumaru.
Thank you for the update deary C:
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From MikoSayuri on May 09, 2014
I really love this chapter, great good on it. I like how you brought Hojo into it. Kagome is blossoming slowly taking in everything. Her inner struggles to keep her emotions in check, and Hojo to give a helping hand as always. I like how she found some sort of solace with Hojo that she can't have with the others which makes their relationship special. Sado is a man version of Miyo great job with writing his character. The abuse Kouga has to indure just like everyone else is brilliantly written. He hides it better than anyone else. In some sense has lost more than others, just for the fact his friends keep dying around him. I hope Sado getting what's coming to him and may in the end he submits to death. Sango's and Kohaku's moment was tearful in a sense, to show he understands her and accepts her relationship. Your really in touch with Sango's feelings to love someone who isn't accepted by the people who you think understand you, I absolutely loved that part. Satomi and Sesshomaru's moment was intense for me, but I loved that finally he's not alone in his ordeal with this. That everyone around him is supporting him and willingly to fight for one another, his true family are his friends, plus Inuyasha now. Now for the last part of the story was heart breaking. For Kagome to endure to hear such a conversation, to gear that the man you is being abuse so cruelty is beyond hurtful know you can't do nothing expect be there for them. To finally open your eyes to the cold hearted truth behind such a delicate situation. You executed that well, and brought the emotions where a reader can relate. I would probably committed to, to hear such things are unheard of. Nice cliff hanger my friend. Again thank you for the update, its truly appreciated! Keep up the good work!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! :-)
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From MikoSayuri on May 09, 2014
First let me put this out there readers who are reading this story. This is GrimLyght story not yours, she's not getting paid for this or anything of the sort. She should be able to write the story the way she wants to not what you feel like needs to be written if you don't like it, read something else. Or write your own story if you want to be so picky about it. She has a life, she doesn't have to write this but she does, and it should be appreciated. So be patient the story will unfold when its time to, I personally don't want a story being rushed because you feel it needs to be. I enjoy the detail she puts forth in every character has its story to tell. Everything is linked together and break it, its not as good as it was intended to be written. GrimLyght I hope you continue with your original style. You shouldn't have to change it, it was fine the way it was. Half way into this don't be pressured by everyone else. This is your story write the way you want. You will always have support from everywhere people will still continue reading. Don't let a few reviews change your story, cause its beautifully executed. Writer to writer our doing an awesome job! I wouldn't change it but the decision is yours and I support whatever decision you make on this! Keep up the brilliant writing you do!!! :-)
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From MikoSayuri on May 09, 2014
I'm so late for late update on chapter 20, I'm here now lol! I like how this chapter started with a lot of emotions which I love about your writing. Again the inter actions with the characters I like a lot. It truly shows how close they are of a bunch. Kagome falling apart at the stem is a nice touch if you ask me. Your bring out her emotions and the pain she feels, I felt in touch with the story. The whole pool scene I love between Sesshomaru and Kagome, it was bitter sweet. But I understand Sesshomaru's character is complicated well when is it not lol! I like the passion between them like if they were lovers who hadn't seen each other in while, great writing for that scene, truly amazing work. Also like how you threw in there that Bank wanted to kill Kouga nice touch on that part. Sesshomaru's conflicting moments with his beast I like when you write those in there to show the inner turmoil. The last scene I love the way you ended that scene. I like how to paired everyone up on the island. Sango and Naraku was interesting how he's already defending his soon to be mate, I love it. Miroku and Kohaku seriously need to get their act together though. Satomi about to lose her baby nice cliff hanger I but I know it will survive lol! All in all great writing from you. Thank you for updating with your busy schedule now, but don't worry I'll always be here lol! Your awesome!!! :-)
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From ANON - Deb.23 on April 29, 2014
This is the most craziest and confusing fanfic i have ever read! As much as I dont want Satomi to lose her baby and i want her to be happy, i think it will be easier if she loses her kid.. I dont suppose Sessh's mother is going to die anytime soon? The bitch from hell deserves nothing less than torture.. oh! How i wish i could kill her....
Why doesnt Sessh tell kag about her mother? Didnt kag notice marks on sessh's body when they were out of the pool?? Yippee!!! Sessh and Kag get to share a room....
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From ANON - Deb.23 on April 12, 2014
Manipulative bitch... if i could i would knock that bitch from hell unconscious.. do youkai live a really long life in this fic? I hope you have a really horrifing way to kill Miyo.. maybe her plane crashes into the sea making Sessh free from her at least for the time being... Shouldn't Sessh be strong? Strong enough to fight her, the bitch of a mother? You really do love to keep us on our toes, dont you? Update soon.. i was wondering... when thay come back, why not let Sessh go mad or rouge on Miyo, in turn, harming her and then Kagome comes to save the day.... that would be exciting... or are you planning to let her and her friend abuse Sessh??? Damn..
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From MikoSayuri on April 11, 2014
I loved this chapter!!! Katsu and Naraku's scene was emotional, I literally cried! It truly shows just how much a father loves his sons, scene very well written. Poor Sango and Naraku I really feel for their relationship. It will be a bumpy ride, I can't wait to read what her father, brother, and Miroku will say. Will Miroku have change of heart about Sango. So many things letter to be said, and I love it! Satomi and Shippo's scene was just too cute, he's trying to be brave for his sister, just so adorable! Sesshomaru's dream was just plain good and twisted, I like how you wrote that particular scene too. Again Kagome is power is interesting, slowly your giving hints what her power can do. Also I can understand how she is jealous of Satomi too, she wants the closeness that they share. I'm glad Sesshomaru finally admitts something to her, but was interrupted by Rin. Tatsu and Take had kids with the same woman, to me is hilarious. Which is their fault for sleeping with someone like her. Take is going to kill that women, and hopefully open his eyes to the way he treats Sesshomaru. Tatsu just needs to show up unannounced and meet his daughter. I like how Rin is like her father, I can't wait for the happy reunion. I'm not surprise that Miyo is friends with Miroku's mom, talk about two of a kind lol! Thank you for the update!! Keep up the awesome writing!! :-)
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From ANON - Deb.23 on April 02, 2014
That bitch!! I hope she burns in the deepest pits of hell with the devil torturing her for eternity. Miyo, my ass. That fucking messed up bitch better be dying... How dare she rape or even kiss or even think of touching her own son inappropriately?? I wish i knew her thoughts.. what was she thinking when she did that!!???!! That messed up piece of a woman... His father allows that too?? How dare he?
Besides that, Kagome and Sessh seem even more cute and made-for-each-other than in any other stories... I know its kinda cheesy but i hope they get together and kill Miyo. As we all know, a miko and a youkai are unstoppable....
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From MikoSayuri on March 29, 2014
Aww!!! Naraku and Sango's perfect moment. Finally one parent understands but how will the rest take it. I can't wait for Sango's fathers reaction and the brothers of course. I high doubt this is their last trial, but interesting turn of events. Sesshomaru and Kagome is getting intense, I love it. I'm wondering if Kagome is going to find out the secret about his mom. Or will she find out through her powers. Kouga is finally seeing things which I'm glad for, but hopefully him and Kagura get an introduction. I do like how the fathers are going to cut ties once the wife dies, its a relief in itself. But I can help but feel bad for Naraku's dad he needs some one to love him. Maybe Kagome's mom would be a good one, but my mind is doing over time lol!! Great chapter I love where this story is going! Keep up the good work!!! :-)
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From ANON - Colouredblossom on March 19, 2014
Amg it's amazing, you always have me standing on the tips of my toes. So exciting, dramatic and well written! C:
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From MikoSayuri on March 18, 2014
I knew it! Sesshomaru would instigate their first kiss! It was short lived, but it happened none the less. Honestly, I love where Kagome and Sesshomaru are heading, it's a never ending thrill ride, lol! Naraku, boy is he getting depressed, but don't worry Sango is there to save him from himself. I can't wait for their private conservation, forbidden love is the best, lol! I know once they get some action of their own its going to be sweet and romantic. Then comes in Kohaku and Miroku breaking it up, dumb asses, but they will not succeed, lol! Kouga, he deserves his guilty conscious for what he did to Naraku. If he would have listen and use that nose of his. He would have been able to tell Naraku wasn't lying. I hope his dad gives him a beating he'll never forget. Can you say father's like son's, because their dad's are spiting images of each other, lol! I do understand where Naraku's dad is coming from though, I would flip a switch if my son was in the hospital. Also, I like how Satomi just laid it on Sesshomaru, he finally opened somewhat of his eyes. Also, I knew Kagome could take away his pain, something to do with her power, and gave him new sensations, he never felt. Oh, I just love it!!! Thank you for this beautiful update!!! Keep up the awesomeness of your writing!!!! :-)
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From MikoSayuri on March 16, 2014
This was an intense chapter, but I loved it every minute of it. Now I even feel even worst for Sango, poor her only a few in minutes in heaven with him. Kagome I completely understand where she is coming, but I bet she won't attempt to kiss again, unless Sesshomaru instigates a kiss. Satomi she doesn't completely trust Sango and Kagome with telling them she's pregnant. Hopefully she tells the girls that they can be there for moral support,which she's going to need more than anything. Naraku I do feel bad for, it seems he never gets a break. Something always happens to him, now that Sango's in the picture. Maybe that would help him get stronger, because he would have something to live for, and protect. I'm glad Hakkaku died by Naraku's hand, that's what he gets for bullying him all those years. A surprise guest, I can't wait! Thank you for the awesome update!! Keep up the good writing!! :-)
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From MikoSayuri on March 07, 2014
Kuroi Kirishima

All of your readers should go check it out, I like the story already. GrimLyght is not giving any clues of who she will be pairing in this story. But I have a feeling its going to be interesting turn of events. I like the idea of being stranded on an island. What would it be, if not for our favorite characters to be in this sticky situation, talk about survivor one on one, lol! If anything GrimLyght hasn't disappointed us yet. So, go read the first chapter, and I promise it will leave you wanting more. :-)
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From MikoSayuri on March 07, 2014
*Drool* Inuyasha and Jak, I loved the smutt!! I'm glad their finally out in the open about things. Although I see it with trials ahead. Such a great pairing and well done. Naraku and Sango I do feel bad for them. It seems their relationship will have alot of hardships. I just want to slap Miroku and Kohaku for their ignorance! Sesshomaru and Kagome their intimacy is going to be a problem. But I do know a solution to their problem, if Kagome can feel his pain through her powers. Then she can obviously take it away maybe not the memory, but pain the memory causes. But its just my mind working over time, hehehe! Thank you for the wonderful update! Keep up the amazing writing, you do! :-)
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