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Reviews for Hime no Aisu

By : GrimLyght
  • From ANON - Deb.23 on March 07, 2014
    Oh! I feel bad for Kagome. She kissed his neck, for Christ's sake! I cant believe what a bitch Sessh's mom is. How dare she rape her SON! Her own blood! Shameless daughter of a bastard! Ugh! How can anyone be so fucking cruel? Did his father know he was being raped by his mother, trying to keep his son and her daughter safe? The guts! If I had any say, I would have killed them. Parents be damned. And Sessh left her hanging? How dare he become cold after that! And Kagome... the poor girl's life just got worse, and she doesnt even know it. I feel for her... update soon. I'm getting so distracted just thinking about this situation. I cant believe it... your words have an addiction quality. And Inuyasha was awesome. Jak is sooo cute. I wish I could terrorise him too.. He's fun. Whats wrong with Sango, anyway? I think I've asked you enough so, bye for now!
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  • From ANON - Deb.23 on March 05, 2014
    Even I have always loved winter. Though I never thought about it the way you described it, but I felt it. I felt as if I was standing looking outside instead of Kagome... I totally agree with you on that one. And Naraku and Sango, oddly enough make a good couple. But what I'm dying to read id Sessh and Kag. The progress is slow but I wanna know more about them. And does Kagura get together with Kouga? What happened with Ayame? And please... please, give me a kiss to think about... even a peck from Kag would work.. please.. I want to see some sexual tension than awkward tension.. Sessh is a little to OOC but I don't know why it just suits him in some ways.... Anyway, I think this is the longest review I have ever given anyone.. I'm dying to get something from them. Something a little bit more than amazing, shy glances... Onegai! Ja for now... Enjoy!
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 28, 2014
    I didn't expect you to update so soon, thank you. Finally Kagura lefted Miroku, no offense. But I can't wait for her and Kouga to get together. Satomi and Bank I'm glad their keeping, despite the hell they will go through to keep the baby. Naraku and Sango, I sheded a few tears as well, no joke. Beautifully executed between them. I know its getting risky for them, I just hope neither one gets hurt. But what would it be without some drama, lol! Inuyasha and Jak is still kind of rocky, and I like it! Of course you know, I support the smutt, no need to ask me twice lol! At last, Sesshomaru and Kagome is so intense and unsure, I love it, that's it taking time to blossom. Keep the amazing writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. :-)
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  • From ANON - Colouredblossom on February 28, 2014
    I am really loving the direction this fanfiction is going in. The way you build the relationships between the characters isn't rushed and flows very nicely. I am excited for your next update C:
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  • From ANON - TwistedAnime on February 27, 2014
    I love your story. I love how you're showing that every couple has different issues but are trying. I think the way you are slowly building a relationship with Kagome and Sesshomaru is great. Them really only sharing one secret at a time is believable. It's not rushed or fake feeling which I like. You have the perfect blend for it to seem real. Although I have to say I really want Miyo to die horribly. Just a wrong bitch.
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 26, 2014
    The chapter was amazing!!! I swear I can't get enough of your story. To answer your question, no I guessed, our great minds think alike lol! I love how its getting so intense. Thank you for the insight on Miyo. She is dark, twisted, and cruel. You pulled it off well. Run now you have me wondering, whose the father? If its Sesshomaru, boy do I feel bad for Run. Not because he is the father, its because they lied to her. Which I hope I'm wrong. Sesshomaru and Kagome I think there is going to a setback, I feel it!! Naraku and Sango can't wait for the convo! Inuyasha and Jak too. OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the brilliant writing, you do! :-)
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  • From ANON - Dokubana on February 25, 2014
    Omg I love this story so much.
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 21, 2014
    I can't stop crying. I felt like I was there. Truly a amazing written chapter. So many emotions and you brought them to life. You did a wonderful job writing it out. I can see why it took some time to write. I'm glad Kouga finally got in the mix. Poor Sato I though I hope she keeps the baby. As for Kagura I feel bad for her still. It wouldn't be a bad idea to pair her with Kouga. Its just a thought that popped in my head. I love you story. Its getting very interesting and intense. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the brilliant work, you do. :-)
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 16, 2014
    I think the story flowed well. You worry too much. Naraku was harsh with Kagome, but I like that. Sango reaction was good. She picked her friend over a man excellent. The whole situation with Sesshomaru his siblings. Was a very well written scene. Last but not least the smutt. I absolutely loved it. Your a natural at writing smutt. It had a drooling lol. I felt bad for Kagura. I hope she gets hers. I love this chapter. Keep up the excellent writing. I can't wait for the next chapter! :-)
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  • From ANON - Athaliah on February 16, 2014
    Love your story. Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 13, 2014
    I like how Satomi is revealing a little by little about Sesshomaru's past to Kagome. The little in sight about the complications of Naraku and Sango very interesting. Naraku and Kouga past was well told. Also Satomi and Seshomaru's past is intense and I like it. I think smut is a great idea. I support it a hundred percent. I say go for it. All in all very good chapter. Keep up the wonderful writing you do.
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  • From ANON - Declension on February 12, 2014
    Really can't wait to see what comes next!
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 11, 2014
    I personally love this chapter the most so far. It has a little bit of everything in this chapter. Its brilliant and executed well. I like how it was woven together through out the chapter. I do like the Inuyasha and Jak pairing. Its not something you see all the time. Its usually Kouga that pairs up with Inuyasha. I like how you chosen one dominate male, instead of two. I think of this series of a mini novela. I like how you don't just focus on just one pairing. I love how all sides of your characters stories are told. I do appreciate the detail you put into all characters and the trails they go through. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From MikoSayuri on February 10, 2014
    I've been reading your story since the beginning. I love your story and I like direction it's going in. It's rare to have a Naraku and Sango pairing. Honestly I think in this story the pairing works out. I think you should add a little twist before they get together. For example people trying to prevent from getting together. It would make it interesting. Sesshomaru and Kagome I love how things are going so far. I would stretch things out between them. Just to pull in the audience more, but this is your fanfic. I hope you don't take this the wrong way. I do love your story very much. I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 05, 2014
    I don't feel like you added the backstory in any awkward way. It flowed well. I liked how kagome didn't open up to sess really easily, it made it more realistic.while I want them to get together it can't be rushed. So good chapter! I need more, please write soon.
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