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Reviews for Captured

By : kaotixkry
  • From GirlPup on May 18, 2018

    Do you plan to finish this story? I hope so, it’s pretty good. I wanna know what Narku is up to. I need to know how Kagome and Sesshomaru will escape,  no I must know! Awesome story, well written! I hope you finish this!!!


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  • From ANON - natalie19 on August 07, 2016

    cuando sera la continuacion  , u.u se espera inpaciente   


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  • From ANON - syndey on April 28, 2015
    Next chapter pleaz I love this story
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  • From ANON - saky on December 14, 2014
    Please update :)

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  • From bertabee1 on November 24, 2014
    Finally now maybe we can get out of this dungeon.
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  • From ANON - moodymel on October 22, 2014
    Very good story. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Monica Rivers on September 14, 2014
    I wonder why Naraku wanted to virgins for his plans. Once Koga took Sango's, Narku needs to adjust his plan. Is he just a sadistic bastard that wants to rape the women that helped get in way?
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  • From lara5170 on August 29, 2014
    I enjoyed how every detail was explained but felt very confused about what was going on. The summary mentioned Kagome/Sessh & that was the main reason I chose to begin reading this because I'm a huge Sessh/Kagome fan & usually enjoy reading any FF that has them together but there was no sign, nor mention of him in this other than from Kagomes P.O.V. when she'd thought (or hoped??) she was having a dream. I don't know if this will be continued but I'll try to check up on it from time to time. I'm curious about what Kogas involvement in this is, as it described him as also being 'collared' while at the same time he seemed to be taking orders (not well) from Naraku. I had no idea that the male with Kagome was a 'cat' youkai until I read it mentioned in the A.N.. I'm very curious about where the rest of the inu-tachi is & how Kagome & Sango ended up in the clutches of Naraku. I'm not a fan of Naraku in an intimate way because while he uses the face that he stole from another to make himself attractive, I can't get past the spider/insect part of him because I'm both terrified & disgusted by any & all insects/spiders.
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  • From MikoSayuri on May 27, 2014
    I loved this short chapter! The insight on what's going on with Kagome is appreciated! I like how you portrayed Kagome, I think any girl would go nuts if they didn't get no release lol! Now you have me thinking if Kagura has been abused by Naraku, and feels for Kagome because she went through the same treatment. My mind is whirling with ideas lol! A quick question though, will be there be abuse to the charcters like in your first story? I hope you keep that aspect to the story. It makes us feel more connected to the characters. Just a question, by all means I don't mean harm to you as an author. Great writing from you as always! Keep up the amazing writing you do! I can't wait for what you have in store for Sesshomaru! :-)
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  • From MikoSayuri on May 27, 2014
    OMG! I love this chapter! The emotions you put into this chapter. The inner struggle with Sango was having with herself, was well written. Kouga, I like how he didn't just want to please himself. It was sweet of him to think of her discomfort, and please her too! Well written chapter, great job. Also, I like the cliff hanger where Naraku comes in! Will she get pregnant or mated, you have me thinking lol! All in all I loved it! Keep up the amazing writing! :-)
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  • From ANON - Libracourt on May 24, 2014
    Summary says Kagome gets captured...however there's only been talk of Sango (which I noticed you spelt Songo). Is this a Kagome fic or a Sango fic?
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  • From MikoSayuri on May 21, 2014
    I love chapter two! I so didn't see Sango coming into the picture. I like Sesshomaru's scene, but I wish I read more with him in it. I hope to read more of him, since you kind of been skimming the surface with him. I can't to read what you have in for Sesshomaru's smut scene in the future. Sango and Kouga's scene was awesome by the way. I never really read about them, so its interesting you brought that into the story. Very well written and the smut lol! Thank you for the update! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great writing! :-)
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  • From MikoSayuri on May 21, 2014
    I'm glad to see you continue this story, but I'm also sad. I did like how the other story started, even though there was a lot going on. Kouga and Sesshomaru's treatment in the other one I like, because I thought they were going to get revenge and all. Plus I like how it started off with Kagome, Kouga, and Sesshomaru. I know stories take different turns and all, which I do respect that. But I do like this story, I'll support you on this one. I love the smut and the details you put forth in your story. Thank you for the update! Keep up the good work! :-)
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