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Reviews for Responsibility

By : MeledyText44
  • From nchsmi on July 22, 2016

    Wow...  This was  crazy!  What will happen went Sesshoumaru lands in the village, and tries to take InuYasha away? The pack will go nuts!  Kagome won't be able to take it, I'm sure.  After all, he's the very demon that has hated InuYasha for centuries!

    Great job.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

     

    B reading U!


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  • From ANON - dyami on May 19, 2016
    I was well amused. Sesshomaru admitting his demon over powered him. will he treat InuYasha with due respect & love now please do continue. update frequently least your story will be forgotten.
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  • From ANON - syndey on March 24, 2015
    Next chapter pleaz I love this story
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on September 20, 2014
    poor inu...i only hope the rest of the inu gang can convince sess to let inu stay at the village - living in the palace, surrounded by demons who loathe him, would be hell for inu, not to mention dangerous. odds are jealous demonesses or even the servants would try to kill him/the pups....and hopefully sess won´t try to seperate inu from his pups, right now he seems cold enough to do it, one can only hope that his inner demon also has some strong 'must protect and care for pregnant mate'-instincts aside from the obvious 'get utterly horny no matter who´s in heat'-urges. hell, if push comes to shove, inu can still flee through the well, where sess can´t follow. that would teach him a lesson about how to treat the 'mom' of his pups!
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  • From ANON - Nikkie23534 on September 19, 2014
    Awesome story so far. I wonder if InuYasha will try to escape Sesshomaru by jumping through the well. If so, will Sesshomaru's anger and demonic strength break through the barrier in order to retrieve his family? What will Sesshomaru be willing to do to keep InuYasha and their pups by his side? Then there's Naraku of course. Will he discover InuYasha's condition? If so, what would he plan? So, many possibilities for this story. I hope you give up a new chapter soon.

    Until then...
    B reading!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2014
    Way to short. It was barely an intro to a chapter
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  • From SplendentGoddess on September 16, 2014
    Wanted to leave another review because I didn't want you thinking I was insulting you in any way. I was angry with your first four reviewers, LOL. I do find it curious, though, how you could make such bizarre spelling errors when even reading one single other fanfiction would've given you the correct spellings. Something that occurred to me, of course, like two seconds after submitting my first review, LOL, and I was already a couple minutes late leaving for work so I had to fly out the door. It does seem odd that you'd come up with the 'Inuyasha goes into heat and gets pregnant by Sesshoumaru' scenario without having read any of the other stories out there that use this angle, but I digress. At any rate, I encourage you to keep writing, and I wanted only to give you the correct spellings so that you could learn and advance as an author. I'm still shaking my fist at the other four people for letting it slide, LOL, but I didn't mean to come across as upset with you over it, personally. It was obviously an accident 'cause you just didn't know any better; that's no reason to get upset with anyone, and spelling errors aside I'm enjoying this story. I wouldn't bother reading it otherwise. Aside from working on your spelling, I do suggest you improve your formatting, because like somebody else said it's a little hard to read. Take the time to peruse some other fanfics and see how they're formatted. Over all, you learn by doing, so keep it up!
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  • From SplendentGoddess on September 16, 2014
    I don't know why nobody else has said it, so I will. I find it deplorable, really - not your own lack of knowledge, but everyone else's deliberate decision to not assist you. You have gotten everyone's name spelled wrong outside of Inuyasha and Kagome themselves; clearly you've never read the manga nor even looked at the credits on an episode of anime. But how are you supposed to learn if no one teaches you? Shame on you, other readers! Anyway, the correct spellings are as follows: Sesshoumaru, Sango, Miroku, Shippou, Kaede & Kirara. I won't nitpick the fact that he wouldn't have a noticeable bump at only three weeks, nor would Kaede be able to tell from feel how many separate fetuses there are. Hell, maybe inu-youkai pregnancies develop way faster than human ones. It was the spelling thing that was bugging me the most; the rest is your own imagination and nobody can dictate what is or isn't accurate in your own fantasy.
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  • From Vyper on September 15, 2014
    This is a good story, a little hard to read, but good. I look forward to the update.
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  • From ANON - Peya Luna on September 03, 2014
    not bad! your chapters could be longer though...
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 02, 2014
    good start add more soon:)
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  • From ANON - Ayame on September 02, 2014
    Your off to a good start but you prologue and 2 chapter should be combined also revise you work you made some errors and left out some words.
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