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Reviews for As She Steps Through Time

By : Mrs_Hart
  • From Hunter13 on February 11, 2017

    I am enjoying the direction this story is taking. I can't wait to read the next chapter.


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  • From jewl on January 31, 2016
    amazing story please update soon
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  • From ANON - shelby on September 15, 2015
    Please update soon this story is really good!!!!!
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  • From bertabee1 on January 24, 2015
    OK well am glad you did update I hope you don't abandon the story. Its good and has so much more room to grow with.
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  • From estelin on January 06, 2015
    this was amazing cant wait for more
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  • From bertabee1 on November 16, 2014
    Its really a shame you abandoned this story. I loved it laughed so hard at some chaps. Don't be so hard on yourself you keep saying you didn't like some of the last chaps but they where the ones I thought was the funniest in some places. You do good work.
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  • From lara5170 on October 17, 2014
    I really hope there will be more. I'm looking forward to Sango's part & what will happen with Kouga. I'm a bit confused about why the Elder said he was giving Kagome a gift & that gift was Kouga. I also can't believe how stupid Ayame is....basically asking for death by attempting to challenge Kagome in a fight to the death.
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  • From lara5170 on October 17, 2014
    I was so happy when I read the part where Kagome got her powers back & became whole and I was so excited about this story... but, then when Sessh's thoughts (?) stated that after she brought balance to their world she'd be gone.. it felt like someone stuck me with a pin. All my happiness and looking forward to what would become of Kagome & the Inu bro's just left me. Now I don't know what to do. I really hope he's wrong. Since he only knows what he does from what he's read about what was written about other beings like Kagome in the past, I'm hoping he's wrong. Otherwise, the only thing I feel I have to look forward to in this story is them (Kagome & the Inu bro's ?) defeating a great evil, putting the jewel back together (& I hope Inu learns that it isn't 'his wishing jewel' as he seems to believe), bringing balance to the world & Kagome disappearing. I truly hope there is more to this story than that because I was looking forward to her finding love & living a happy life (I like stories with happy endings & try to avoid stories that don't have happy endings because they just make me sad)...
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  • From lara5170 on October 17, 2014
    I just finished reading Ch.6, and I realized that while it mentioned how her mom knew she needed to tell Kagome the truth about herself.....I noticed by the end of the chapter there had been no mention of whether her mom had told her anything. I'm also a bit confused by much of what I've read so far so I really hope more will be revealed in the following chapters & most importantly, that Kagome finds out the truth about her past.
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