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Reviews for Somone Worthy of This Sesshomaru

By : Lady_Demonia
  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 28, 2014
    Awesome chapter. Hope to read more
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  • From ANON - The Gazi pack on October 26, 2014
    You say it's a oneshot? To bad, I'd like to know what happens next!
    ^___^
    5/5
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  • From ANON - MARION Crombecque on October 26, 2014
    I think your story lacks just a little in depth for each point of view. We readers would like to know how InuYasha is feeling being in heat, he is too normal you know ?
    And I prefer Daiyoukai and Youkai, not yoki or other....
    This is nevertheless a good beginning. Just please find a beta to correct vocabulary errors at least :(. I'm french but can recognize the wrong words. It's more dfficult to appreciate truly a story with errors I'm sorry !

    Please try a second chapter, I want to see InuYasha's face and reaction !
    Bonjour de la France,
    A french mother
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