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Reviews for Deliverance

By : inufan625
  • From INeedNoIntroduction on November 04, 2020

    First off, bravo! This story is very engaging! I enjoy seeing the characters in a different setting, more present-day. I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters, and while I'll be sad that this must come to an eventual end (not too soon, I hope!), I do hope that this will have the ending it deserves and not fizzle out like so many others do. The story is so well done, in fact, that the minor errors are easy to overlook. However, should you choose to have it updated, I'll be more than happy to send you a proof-read copy.

    The tornados last year werr awful. We are from Richardson, and one of the tornados came within about a 1/4 mile from out home, as well. I'm not going to lie, I cried when I saw the damage of our city the next morning, and especially the absolute decimation of Walnut Hill in Dallas (the worst hit that night) on my way to work the next day. I do hope your property has survived and been repaired.


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  • From Legendleigh on July 28, 2019

    This is a wonderful story, please please please finish it.


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  • From Legendleigh on June 23, 2019

    I have really enjoyed this story and have read it several times. It has action adventure and love and lust, I really wish you would finish it please


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  • From ef_tay on March 26, 2019

    love it ah wish there was more!


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  • From Talathewolfgirl on July 30, 2018

    Please continue :)


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  • From ThePumpkinWitch on February 21, 2018

    I love this story, and i'm excited to see how things go. Expecially with that dance.


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  • From SammyJams on April 15, 2017

    Been waiting a year for an update!!!! Please, keep going!!!


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  • From ANON - shellnet on October 18, 2016

    more soon pleas


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  • From ANON - on July 25, 2016

    Such an awesome one, I've read it like 10 times please update soon I would love to read what happens  next 😊


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  • From ANON - Kristina Mitchell on June 12, 2016
    Oh my god this story is awesome!! I couldn't stop reading it til I got to the end! I seriously hope you are still working on it.
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  • From ANON - Sylvia on May 27, 2016
    You are a pretty good writer. ;) Please keep going, I love it so much!!! They are so perfect together, I'm jealous. I need my own InuYasha. :D
    When does the next chapter come out? I hope as soon as possible, because I can not wait. *.*
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  • From ANON - Rachel on May 21, 2016
    This story is really good, I see you edited it recently so I really hope you decide to continue it soon!!!
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  • From ANON - sam on March 25, 2016
    Are you going to continue this story i love it and want to read more
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  • From bertabee1 on March 01, 2016
    Good to see the update. Sorry to hear about your home. Glad you and yours are alright and safe.
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  • From bertabee1 on December 17, 2015
    Great chap love the bad ass kagome and the loving inu
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