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Reviews for Choose Your Own Adventure: Sesshomaru's Tale

By : Indigoplatform
  • From Dunkelgelb on January 24, 2016
    Brilliant! Looking at your profile, I realized that I had read your "Dalliance" on HF before reading this fic here on AFF. Reading these fics of yours is like looking at one of artist Trainer/Frontierbrain's InuYasha-related, "rule 34" pictures. In fact, I think you may have commissioned him/her to draw them or perhaps written your stories with those pictures in mind.

    Some additional thoughts:

    1. Each chapter has a healthy amount of words in it and the resulting sentences are vivid and well-constructed.
    2. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation is generally very good, with only minor errors in places.
    3. You use characters from the IY manga and anime that often go ignored/unused, such as Byakuya and Botan/Momijii.
    4. The structure of a "Choose Your Own Adventure" fic means that this one of yours could be dozens of chapters long. If each chapter is as detailed as the ones you've posted so far, then you will be putting a great deal of work into writing the fic, something which I think deserves admiration.

    Good job, keep it up!
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  • From AFFModerator on January 24, 2016

    Please correct your disclaimer.


    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.


    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it. At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.


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