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Reviews for Ever Us -- Spa Day

By : DaddysSpecialRequest
  • From nchsmi on April 01, 2019

    It was nice that Rin's birth parents had been reincarnated, and reunited in marriage again.  Their deaths were so hard on a child so young.  Killed by bandits, while she watched.  That had to be awful on so many levels.  It's no wonder that when she found Sesshomaru that day in the woods, she latched onto him.  Like somehow she knew that this was a man that would protect her no matter what.  She knew he was different.  So, it was really cool that you had InuYasha and Sesshomaru meet them.  Even if it's just to satisfy a minor curiousity.  Kudos to you for that!

    Sibling rivalry.  I've had to put out more than my fair share in this house!  The worst was Devon, Ti'Ana, and Ki'Ana.  Ti and Ki are twins, and Devon is 13 months older than they are.  When the twins were born, Devon was so unhappy.  She didn't understand why mommy, daddy, and everyone in the house seem to ignore her.  Why were the babies more important.  I had to sit her down and try to explain to her.  Ti and Ki can't tell us how they feel, and what they want the way she can.  So, that's why it seems that we have to spend more time with them.  It took sometime, but she FINALLY got the idea.  But that was a hard year!

    What is it with men and breast milk?  LOL!!!  I swear, my husband and Sesshoumaru shared the same brain in that regard!  Breast milk became an addiction to Joe.  Sometimes I think the reason why we got pregnant so much was so I would keep my milk up!  It's like I was his own person cow!  To be honest, his addiction saved my life!  So, this cow is grateful!  LOL!

     

    Awesomeness Achieved as usual!

     

    B reading U!

    BTW: The love scene between InuYasha and Sesshomaru was good.  However, I don't know.  It might be just me, but it felt a bit forced.  It didn't have a slow romantic feel to it like your story usually portrays.  It seems, I don't know...  Technical.   I might be just nit-picking about it.  But your work is always solid!  And I love the new icon!

     


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